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i'm new and feel i need direction, feel free to dig in, i need the criticism

A short, Imagist poem composed for English class in my junior year. I wrote it in under 5 minutes but quickly fell in love with it.

Written 5/3/11. This was written when I was feeling particularly lonely and knew I was lying to everyone who saw me.

Written 5/3/11. This is about the absolute loneliness that I've felt lately.