Understanding The Complexity of a Simple Mind Part II

But maybe the sigh was one of relief, not fear

Expressions are often mistaken for numerous reasons.

Maybe there is no ending

But with our constant desire to label everything we call it the end

But never stop to think of anything beyond ourselves because the clock ticks on.

Never stopping for a single breath,

As I suffer an asthma attack.

I fall behind

Yet the clock keeps up pace.

For no one will ever win the race.

And with a click, a sigh, a bang

Father time takes strides in front of me

Nothing ended

For the clock still ticks

As it spirals on and on

Always a stranger to "the end"

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I felt like I was starting a

I felt like I was starting a trip or something-

"And with a click, a sigh, a bang


Father time takes strides in front of me

Nothing ended

For the clock still ticks

As it spirals on and on"

 

So much mental imagery of the reality, physical form and the essence... it just makes sence to me.

I enjoy how you made this Part I and Part II.

Such a great Idea, it gets the readers attention- there's more to read.

I might do that once in a while ;)