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patriciajj commented on: Clinging To A Shrine I Could Only Imagine by Seryddwr 1 year 48 weeks ago
The inspiration you draw from: The inspiration you draw from Nguyen De is like a transporting breeze, and this is no exception; the vibrant winds resulted in excellence in purity, emotional impact and execution.   It's lines like these that glisten and hum long after the last line is read:   ". . . So, in my junior high school naivete, I concluded that if I could imagine bruises, scrapes, and damage schoolbooks into reality, I should also be able to imagine my own, private, and sheltering shrine to the Glory of Christ."   Quiet magnificence.
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patriciajj commented on: Relapse by humanfruit 1 year 48 weeks ago
Your expression whispers and: Your expression whispers and haunts and shatters. A few delicate, relatable lines that pinpoint the experience take on so much power in your talented hands that I'm silenced. And that's art.    
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patriciajj commented on: A message for a friend by SSmoothie 1 year 48 weeks ago
"sometimes its as simple as : "sometimes its as simple as  remembering to reach out with a prayer and breathe in the answer"   The casual splendor, the unflinching truth, the shimmering wit, the realness of your expression has almost moved me to tears.   Every line says: "I know!"   Every word says: "hope"   A perfect pocket dial with a profound message that makes us all your friend.  
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Pungus commented on: JOIN TOGETHER by georgeschaefer 1 year 48 weeks ago
Mmm: Fair enough, good sir, in faith we surf the waves of turfs unblurffed by words
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georgeschaefer commented on: JOIN TOGETHER by georgeschaefer 1 year 48 weeks ago
redemption of a: redemption of a recollection.  Just a memory of some youthful bliss.
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Starward commented on: Clinging To A Shrine I Could Only Imagine by Seryddwr 1 year 48 weeks ago
Thanks.: Thanks.
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Starward commented on: He should be dead by LornaRJ 1 year 48 weeks ago
I like the way you have used: I like the way you have used a skeptic's point of view for this poem.
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uninvited_1 commented on: Unknown by uninvited_1 1 year 48 weeks ago
Thanks pungus.  Glad you can: Thanks pungus.  Glad you can connect with it. 
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Pungus commented on: Unknown by uninvited_1 1 year 48 weeks ago
Speaks to me personally: Speaks to me personally, which is good considering I really like the content.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: No stone unturned, leave by Teytonon 1 year 48 weeks ago
Musk is proof of man's great disease: People will ignore your grave sins - as long as you dress your words in their tribal outfits - until you sin against them. And, just the same, those who despised you before will suddenly sing your praise if you turn your fangs against their enemies.
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Pungus commented on: Clinging To A Shrine I Could Only Imagine by Seryddwr 1 year 49 weeks ago
Subliminal glyphs AGLOW here: Subliminal glyphs AGLOW here, specialized, like scoring a rare card in a Pokemon pack; something happens in the snap of your fingers, as you clack down courage upon the keyboard, and navigate us through a powerful pastlife with a flattering, matter-of-fact, lovely language.
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Pungus commented on: NACHOS FOR BREAKFAST by georgeschaefer 1 year 49 weeks ago
Good, good, all good: Hey, don't forget to feed the rats, man!
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Starward commented on: Keep your fingers crossed by Teytonon 1 year 49 weeks ago
Very good point.: Very good point.
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Starward commented on: At The Estate Of Prudentius, The Poet, 1 by Seryddwr 1 year 49 weeks ago
Please . . . please . . .: Please . . . please . . . forgive my discourteous failure to reply and acknowledge this comment.  It was an oversight on my part, horribly embarrassing, but not intended to be disrespectful.  I am so sorry, and I will try to be more careful going forward.    And I certainly like your suggestion about identifying the great Poet's beloved; I will certainly mull that over.
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Starward commented on: EARTH DOES NOT BELONG TO MAN by hawksquaw99 1 year 49 weeks ago
Despite its brevity, this: Despite its brevity, this poem is profoundly wise.
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