In Other Words "Poems": I wrote a book called In Other Words,
I would like to send you a copy that has
more stories. Please
It's saying stories are put into poetic rhyme!
When the lightning strikes
The rains will flow
When the thunder sounds
The winds going to blow
Hurricane is the story put in rhyme...
Story is put into rhyme "Code"
So very evocative . . . for: So very evocative . . . for me, it summons forth a sunlit, warm afternoon in early Autumn; the kind I have always loved since childhood.
Thank you, and wow! That is: Thank you, and wow! That is some backstory which, although I read the poem more than once, simply did not make itself apparent. I feel very silly in having missed so much detail. After all, the poem is not very long, yet I got lost from the outset.
Starward: Jenny is in a witness protection program "Crime Prevention,"
looking for a place to hide until Court date.
Jenny fell in love with a guy she met in the program.
The guy bought her a new shirt and tie.
Jenny has feelings for the guy!
The guy told Jenny to stay focus on Court date,
he's not insterestead in a realitionship with Jenny...
I am a little vague on how: I am a little vague on how she moves from a hiding place, with a shirt and tie, to the lane she needs to stay in, which implies some sort of vehicular accommodation. Explicate this please?
I am far too creaky to be a: I am far too creaky to be a smooth-running robot, and certainly could never be a slick AI. A first year programming student in a mediocre high school could program a better poetry software than I could ever produce, lol.
Guinivere and Lancelot; but: Guinivere and Lancelot; but weren't they adulterers, and came to a bad end? I understand that the rhyme scheme required the use of the names, in order to rhyme the fifth and sixth lines---but could this possibly cast a shadow over a happy poem?
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