choose or others do

Folder: 
NO EYELIDS

 

identical twins with identical names

and robotic responses- women are weird

do i dare to prune the prickly pear?

 

i need a silent signature… but who cares?

so people can see whose pawn be strong

that witch is me

 

alcoholism is a delicate feather dance

after all

 

don’t you hate that everything is fake?

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Just realized there's three question marks in this one; not sure how to feel about that

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I like that third line's

I like that third line's double allusion to T. S. Eliot's poems, The Love Song Of J. Alfred Prufrock and The Hollow Men.


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Thank you quite

And I love how keenly you were able to pinpoint literally my intentions; certainly made me feel good and proud and I'm glad it didn't go unnoticed

at 4 o'clock in the morning


bananas are the perfect food

for prostitutes

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I hope your artistry is never

I hope your artistry is never unnoticed.


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