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Pungus commented on: a dance between skies by redbrick 1 year 19 weeks ago
Sinister when interpretated: Sinister when interpretated as Aliens, or edgy spirits crouched in shadow...
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: a silent witness by redbrick 1 year 19 weeks ago
This excellent poem needs to: This excellent poem needs to be read by evey bullied kid in public or private schools.  I wish such a poem had been available during my most difficult time---February 3rd, 1969 to June 7th, 1974.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: In the Act by Opia 1 year 19 weeks ago
That first stanza carries: That first stanza carries a whole lot of wisdom!
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Pungus commented on: Hölderlin by redbrick 1 year 19 weeks ago
Thusly, Christ redeems me: Thusly, Christ redeems me, where the faggot Catholic fails to see
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redbrick commented on: orbit claimed by redbrick 1 year 19 weeks ago
"Gallery" has quite a ring to: "Gallery" has quite a ring to it and perhaps so due to the effect of Van Gogh and Co on my creative life curriculum and and journey.
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C03Rul3Sc3n7 commented on: Why I write about love so much by Scandalofgrace 1 year 19 weeks ago
An excellent statement of: An excellent statement of intention achieved and demonstrated in these poems.
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C03Rul3Sc3n7 commented on: Fancy verdant garden under a starlit sky by Scandalofgrace 1 year 19 weeks ago
This is very beautiful,: This is very beautiful, except for the word "betwixt," which violates the conversational tone.  Ought to be "between."  Otherwise, this exquisitely beautiful, especially the stanza that introduces the stars.
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C03Rul3Sc3n7 commented on: orbit claimed by redbrick 1 year 19 weeks ago
This is one of the: This is one of the centerpieces of your entire gallery of poems.
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C03Rul3Sc3n7 commented on: PRIDE IN HUMANS by joy 1 year 19 weeks ago
This is . . . has to be . . .: This is . . . has to be . . . one of the MOST BRILLIANT poems on this whole site.
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C03Rul3Sc3n7 commented on: THE BOY IN THE BLUE DENIM DRESS by joy 1 year 19 weeks ago
Except for the line about: Except for the line about "better balance" (better implies judgement and heteronormative prejudice), this is an exceptionally important poem.  Admittedly, I do not care for most of your daily postings, but this is like a lilly in the garden, and I applaud your accomplishment.
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redbrick commented on: today’s battles by redbrick 1 year 19 weeks ago
It can be supposed that our: It can be supposed that our insanity is given some free range in the realm of poetics... licence and justice all rolled into one.  more emojis, but limited on this site.
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redbrick commented on: draft: fill this out later by redbrick 1 year 19 weeks ago
 zeese buttones ? :  zeese buttones ? 
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Pungus commented on: draft: fill this out later by redbrick 1 year 19 weeks ago
I simply cannot keep up, but: I simply cannot keep up, but am very glad this site has no thumbs up buttons or heart emojis, because your work deserves much, much more... PS I eagerly read everything you post
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Pungus commented on: today’s battles by redbrick 1 year 19 weeks ago
UGH!!! dude you just keep: UGH!!! dude you just keep doing it it's insane
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redbrick commented on: time's door by redbrick 1 year 19 weeks ago
The mind accepts this as: The mind accepts this as solidly true but there is this niggling and not unfounded for reasons outside of poetry's scope that ails. It's a feeling that shall morph and pass, but it was there and had wielded its potency. Again, thank you
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