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beaconzbard commented on: WHY DO I INSIST ON BLAZING MY OWN TRAIL by beaconzbard 48 weeks 5 days ago
thanks: Thank you for taking the time to reading this poem.  And thank you for your kind words.  I found encouragement in your comment.
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AdamKeithMcElwa... commented on: Men and Women by metaphorist 48 weeks 5 days ago
"If a man cheats because he: "If a man cheats because he was attracted to another,that's infidelity.   If a woman falls for a jerkbecause he whispered sweet nothings,than she's a fool." So true. Good writing and truthful. 
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S74rw4rd commented on: WHY DO I INSIST ON BLAZING MY OWN TRAIL by beaconzbard 48 weeks 5 days ago
This is an excellent: This is an excellent testimony poem, and presents a significant, but stilll-open, question.  I think we stray from the narrow path because we are broken, flawed, and fallible; but the blessing of this is that we remain constantly aware of our need for a Savior, for Jesus.  The Gospels show us he chose some, just like us, to be His Apostles and evangelists.  Our problem, in Western Christianity, is that we have allowed poor and obscure theology, to focus on primarily on God's wrath rathern than His Love.  The Eastern Church continues to emphasize His Love---they call Him, the Lover of Humankind.  We, in the West, use John 3:16---overuse it, actually---as a text for evangelical effort, emphasizing far too much on the belief aspect that it mentions, and not on God's Love that it describes.  As long as I believe in my Savior, in the Salvation He has made available, and in my own need for such Salvation, I have Salvation.  It is those who have become smug in the Faith, or in their lack of Faith, who have, of their own choice, removed themselves from the haven and shelter of Salvation.   Thank you for writing this amazing poem.  It will speak, and speak convincingly, to many souls.
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S74rw4rd commented on: I LOVE YOU, LORD by beaconzbard 49 weeks 1 hour ago
I really, really like the: I really, really like the testimony that this poem presents.  Its lines are energetic, and their brevity keeps the poem moving until it concludes.  The fourteenth and seventeenth lines do not work, at least for me; as they seem to reduce God to a spy, which is a pejorative term:  His knowledge of our lives is not obtained by "spying" upon them. Other than that, I applaud the Faith that made this poem possible; and, coming ouf of the writer's block you mentioned, it is mighty impressive!!!
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Vamprose commented on: Phoenix Un-risen by Vamprose999 49 weeks 15 hours ago
Thank you very much : Thank you very much
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beaconzbard commented on: I LOVE YOU, LORD by beaconzbard 49 weeks 17 hours ago
I read it: I read it on my youtube channel.  Here's the link to the video of me reading it:  https://youtube.com/shorts/leaBJ2mTE2k
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S74rw4rd commented on: What Is Wrong With Calling A Poem A Poem? by S74rw4rd 49 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you for that: Thank you for that perspective:  I appreciate your comment very much.
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S74rw4rd commented on: This Poem by and_hera_met_zeus 49 weeks 1 day ago
No problem, and I did not: No problem, and I did not feel an obligation, just an admiration for this poem.
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S74rw4rd commented on: Of Course You Must, 1 by S74rw4rd 49 weeks 1 day ago
My guess would be the ancient: My guess would be the ancient Greeks who first used the term.  The Greek language did not originally have a lower case, so they must have capitalized everything.  I capitalize it out of respect for the Art and those who serve it.  
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Pungus commented on: A modest nod by humanfruit 49 weeks 1 day ago
You, SSmoothie and Patricia: You, SSmoothie and Patricia, yalls comments are equaled, and so I respond with one comment a-tall, beauties and queens, of what it means to be, an earthling on eternity.
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Pungus commented on: Of Course You Must, 1 by S74rw4rd 49 weeks 1 day ago
You know the answer: Who was the one who coined the capital P in Poem, in the first place, anyways (that which you favor today)? I'll give you a hint
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Pungus commented on: On Faulkner by humanfruit 49 weeks 1 day ago
Shame: Faulkner is insane. That's all I have to say.
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S74rw4rd commented on: On Faulkner by humanfruit 49 weeks 1 day ago
In school and college, I: In school and college, I avoided Faulkner, except for "A Rose For Emily."  Your poem makes me regret that avoidance now.
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and_hera_met_zeus commented on: This Poem by and_hera_met_zeus 49 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you so much: for your kind praise, and never feel obligated to follow my work, I certainly don't feel obligated to write it :D
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Craign1979 commented on: A Mattress Wrapped in Plastic by metaphorist 49 weeks 1 day ago
From romantic to: From romantic to heartbreaking in a moment. Excellent writing. 
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