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would make some cool folk: would make some cool folk song lyrics

deep and thought provoking in: deep and thought provoking in its own way. good job

Every line of this: Every line of this silver-toned, softly lilting summary of life’s journey is a tribute to all of us who walk this human path. It’s very enlightening, even cathartic, to take such a broad and honest assessment of one’s life as you did in these melodic stanzas.    You speak with aching eloquence, a silken voice and wistful reflection about relatable regrets, an untouchable past and priceless experience that, in the end, amounts to a life well lived and years well spent regardless of what was unfinished.    A striking contemplation that floats upon the heart. Well done! 

Like braided hair this: Like braided hair this touches the mind and heart about self and parents. Deeply moving.

There is a depth of sadness: There is a depth of sadness there that refuses to be fathomed.

and on these ruts and: and on these ruts and runnels  carved and smoothed by time and time again shall traverse until the final tolling of the bells

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