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A bit hypocritcal, two-sided: A bit hypocritcal, two-sided methinks idk, to go off musing upon he whom you belittle the authority to muse upon himself? Or perchance high horse methinks idk *raises hands in innocence, as if he really deserved to express his viewpoint in this confused culture of a slice of cheddar cheese* PLEASE, DON'T SHOOT ME SIRRAH, PLEASE!!

Re-reading again, and not for: Re-reading again, and not for the last time, I continue to be amazed.

why-o-me-o-my! what a divine: why-o-me-o-my! what a divine surprise! seriously great stuff the wine of moon so wet with groom begets weather storm of such sweet beauty a-bloom it's true!

Many thanks, Starspared. Much: Many thanks, Starspared. Much appreciated

This is a great homage to a: This is a great homage to a massive star!

Shades of Whitman underscore: Shades of Whitman underscore this clever perspective of a monumental spot in time when the King of Kings, the Light of all Light, was about to make a His entrance.    How endearing, believable and poignant was the reaction of the scholars “pointing like street urchins/ about to enter a banquet hall with tables heavily laden”. I felt I was there, bearing witness through the eyes of the speaker, cast aside by his homeland, but greatly honored by God to experience, even indirectly, an event that will shake the Earth.    The poem brings the verse from Hosea into personal, emotive focus as the reader is given a front row seat to a discovery that ties prophesies, secret societies, history and the promise of deliverance together.    Another inspiring example of your narrative skills bringing the Word to life. 

Hope that doesn't imply that: Hope that doesn't imply that it sounds like fossil poetry