my obsession with you

Sweat would pour off the curve of our cheeks as we hunched over the pieces, 

Sprouting a growing, hopeless infatuation with your mature movements.

I would sit and watch, 

My mind not comprehending the set of your jaw 

Or the words that formed and translated into my childhood. 

 

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patriciajj's picture

Highly significant visuals,

Highly significant visuals, shrewd yet very casual, organic wordplay and sharp freeze-frames at just the right, highly-charged moment . . . So much to unpack in a tight emotional space!

 

It all conspires to make this an explosive work of art. Poetry that really, really works! Love your style! 

arielle's picture

Thank you for your kind

Thank you for your kind words! 


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