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S74rw4rd commented on: To The Poet, The Eminent Constantine Cavafy [XLIX] by J-C4113D 50 weeks 5 days ago
Thank you so very much for: Thank you so very much for that comment.  Looking at the several failed relationships and missed opportunities in his past, Cavafy found a way to redeem them by bringing what was beautiful (or instructive) in them into a lasting poetry in which others could, in a way, commune in his fellowship even after his soar had gone on to the stars.  In the last few days, I have been feeling my own massive list of failures and miss-outs very sharply.  I should like to think that the poems that emerge from that chaos can, provides, as Cavafy said, "a perception of the beautiful" to those who read them.
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patriciajj commented on: smoke and mirrors by redbrick 50 weeks 5 days ago
Brilliant! The structure: Brilliant!   The structure sharply illustrates the nerve-jangling, dead-end process suffered by anyone who has ever had the experience of interacting with an irrational, slippery control freak. You even listed, in ascending order of aggravation, some of the verbal abuser's favorite infuriating, mind-numbing tactics used to keep one ensnared in their juvenile labyrinth.     Then realizing they just aren't worth our time and effort, you mock the lunacy with hilarious word play and bring the poem to an outrageously delightful, visual conclusion.   Spot on and thoroughly enjoyable.  
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patriciajj commented on: Autumn Coffee Run by redbrick 50 weeks 5 days ago
You deliver one of life's: You deliver one of life's best kept secrets in a compact and cleverly simple package:   "Where else is boxed contentment? But where it's found in a moment."   Everyday Zen. Love it!   
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patriciajj commented on: To The Poet, The Eminent Constantine Cavafy [XLIX] by J-C4113D 50 weeks 5 days ago
As I read the pain-torn poem: As I read the pain-torn poem by Cavafy you referenced, I sensed shades of your own travail as expressed in many of your excellent poems. A worthy tribute to a legendary talent.  
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S74rw4rd commented on: THE EVOLUTION OF MY PRAYING by joy 51 weeks 2 hours ago
This is an excellent: This is an excellent testimony and speaks volumes about your Faith.
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Teytonon commented on: Shakespeare quotes by Teytonon 51 weeks 1 day ago
Thanks for your comment..: Thanks for your comment. I'm sure it signifies something, but I can't figure out what it is. One thing for sure, you're certainly not an idiot. I'll have to read   it. Thanks for the suggestion!
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Pungus commented on: Shakespeare quotes by Teytonon 51 weeks 1 day ago
you should check it out: your first quote, though incomplete lacking it's finishing 'full of sound and fury' was what Faulkner used as a title to his book, which is really good.
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Pungus commented on: Valuable thought #1 by humanfruit 51 weeks 1 day ago
thank you: thank you quite. this one felt good to write; it's nice when Poetry comes full circle, like this did, effortlessly.
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beaconzbard commented on: I SHALL REJOICE IN MY INFIRMITIES by beaconzbard 51 weeks 2 days ago
It's now on YouTube: You can watch/hear me read it at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/C2d2h2BiHeg
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ramonathompsont commented on: workman’s woe by humanfruit 51 weeks 3 days ago
a different kind of write. I: a different kind of write. I liked it. thanks for sharing
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beaconzbard commented on: The Doorway by beaconzbard 51 weeks 3 days ago
It's now on YouTube: YOu can now watch/ hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/DS_HzJIaajA
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Teytonon commented on: If only the years were knowledge. by S.X.K 51 weeks 3 days ago
Thank you for this..: Thank you for this wonderful poem. If I may add the following: If only the years were knowledge I'm sure some of us, as we grow older Would accrue enough knowledge to graduate college While others, who no matter how old they get Still play the fool and will be in grade school And of course, there are a few, sad to say Who will still be in pre-K!  
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georgeschaefer commented on: WAKE UP HARD by georgeschaefer 51 weeks 4 days ago
thanks but it's really about: thanks but it's really about waking up groggy and has nothing to do with sex
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patriciajj commented on: The Art of Human Suffering by FuriousIce 51 weeks 4 days ago
It takes uncommon skill to: It takes uncommon skill to turn anguish into outstanding art.   What a ride! Every twist and turn of intricate thought, every juxtaposition of words, every jolt of unsettling reality was penned with sheer brilliance.   How I wanted to swim against some of your stark, immersive waves of defeat and travail, but I have been in this place at times myself and made the same observations about society that I couldn't help making a strong connection to your words. The fury, the catharsis, at the end was palpable.   A spectacular and explosive study of despair. Amazing stuff.  
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Teytonon commented on: everytime by GeneConner2008 51 weeks 6 days ago
Yes, everytime..: Yes, everytime I want to comment how much I dislike your poem, I realize I love it! Thank you for posting it.
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