Thank you kindly. There are: Thank you kindly. There are times though that it could feel almost like a curse. Such use of language. Most gratefully appreciated
This poem's language is: This poem's language is deployed in such a way as to sound ancient and archaic, instead of contemporary, and that is a real feat of writing right there. I applaud the way you demonstrate such poetic skill.
This all too brief poem: This all too brief poem sounds like a working script for a film that only a director, like Kubrick had been, could adequately handle.
There are times when I: There are times when I realise that I am the 'hobo on the tracks' that interrupts Poetry that I am attempting to keep from being from being aborted.
The blowing in/from the sand: The blowing in/from the sand always fascinated me. Sometimes it comes across as raspberry kisses of the seashore. This is a very moving piece.
What struck me most is that: What struck me most is that the infamous rat race has also overtaken the online poetry world. And so we adapt and battle our way through
This one of the TIMELIEST: This one of the TIMELIEST Poems I have ever read here, and it presents a very shrewd and observant view of what I believe s a universal situation. Only a real Poet could have written this; no wannabe could measure up!