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Desperado commented on: Leaving You Once Again (Revised) by 1rockerchic89 39 weeks 3 days ago
Ride um: Ropes and rashes Maybe he’ll jump Watch out for the horn This one’s got a hump   Buck, buck, buck Cowboys going for it  Hang on, hang on Eight seconds with luck   Tape and gauze Bandaids and bandages  Alcohol and spit Rub it in, we gotta get    The next big show Is coming up  It’ll be better in a week  For your arm and seat   Another buckle  another show  Maybe make some money  On the next go 
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S74rw4rd123d commented on: + 27.225 MHz: My Grandparents' Home, EASTER, 2 by S74rw4rd-13d 39 weeks 3 days ago
Rae, I miss your online: Rae, I miss your online presence.  I look forward to reunioning in Heaven.
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S74rw4rd123d commented on: @ 27.225 MHz: An Old Former Settler's Words (Chopin's Nocturnes Playing) Autumn, 1929 by S74rw4rd-13d 39 weeks 3 days ago
I cannot find sufficient: I cannot find sufficient words for an adequate thank you.  As always, you have validated the poem.  I know you are very busy, so I really appreciate your time.
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redbrick commented on: Get help Roscoe by Teytonon 39 weeks 4 days ago
Haha! that was too funny! We: Haha! that was too funny! We just got home from Costco and no sign there of Roscoe...the back story must be real 
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redbrick commented on: to breathe again by redbrick 39 weeks 4 days ago
This was the first post after: This was the first post after a long hiatus between 2012 and 2022. Before that is hard to remember as well.  After reading it again, I realise that it has become a self-fulfilling prophecy in itself. Strange how everything changes and yet remains the same for the most part as well. Perhaps the more peopled our poems are the more they stand a chance at perpetuity. Let's see what another revisit will reveal several years tomorrow form today.
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S74rw4rd123d commented on: "Sunday Winter Temple Trespass" by The1TrueMojo 39 weeks 4 days ago
Superb!: Superb!
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ramonathompsont commented on: Leaving You Once Again (Revised) by 1rockerchic89 39 weeks 4 days ago
powerful and very moving.: powerful and very moving. well done
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Teytonon commented on: George Wendt RIP by Teytonon 39 weeks 4 days ago
Thank you very much..: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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patriciajj commented on: George Wendt RIP by Teytonon 39 weeks 4 days ago
A stirring and honorable: A stirring and honorable tribute that perfectly captures my own gratitude for his gift: the ability to make us forget our struggles for a while and just laugh. Nice work! 
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patriciajj commented on: @ 27.225 MHz: An Old Former Settler's Words (Chopin's Nocturnes Playing) Autumn, 1929 by S74rw4rd-13d 39 weeks 4 days ago
This is so much more than a: This is so much more than a tragic story of star crossed lovers. It has layers of rapture, agony, rage and a human face put on a shameful moment in history.    Written in the margins is a powerful commentary on injustice. And what is more unjust than the joys of love pulverized, annihilated, by senseless, demonic hate? Bringing the real tragedy to life against a backdrop of sweeping, historical disaster was expertly accomplished in the narration.    Without any unnecessary description, no burdensome explanation, we hear the story through the weary, pain-scarred voice of the old settler, shrewdly juxtaposed with angelic classical music in the background. When his lasting trauma (his aversion to music) is revealed, this detail becomes grimly poignant.    The story itself is a masterclass in vibrant, impactful compression. I felt the full spectrum of emotions like a storm that begins with soft, intoxicating winds and ends with utter destruction. So much lived. So much lost.    Congratulations on another milestone! 
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redbrick commented on: Anthem of the Broken Hearted by uninvited_1 39 weeks 6 days ago
Clenching fists and loud: Clenching fists and loud declarations: I will live for you! Can't wait for the instrumentation. Let the music play
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patriciajj commented on: Caspar Phraseology of Knowledge Stimulus by Pungus 39 weeks 6 days ago
It is a pleasure to be back in: It is a pleasure to be back in your gallery of daringly novel and relatable visions. Always on the vanguard of innovative ways to express the joys, frustrations and torments of our human journey, you sculpt art out of life. Each poem I read is one of the following: an eye-opener, a thrilling surprise, a cryptic treasure map, a psychotropic dream, a multifaceted gem–Sometimes all of them in one compact creation.    Here you composed a stirring and pensive statement on the ephemeral nature of academia. But, fortunately, as redbrick wisely explained: “Your thoughts are not confined to certificates or classrooms . . .“   Often your notes on a poem are as sharp as the poem itself. I was really tripping on: “Bro if Poetry Didn't Balance me... Seriously…”    If I wasn’t so insanely busy, I would camp out here for hours and bear witness to a valuable work in progress. Please continue to be a poetic Prometheus, always reaching for cosmic fire.    My greatest respect.   
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redbrick commented on: Untethered Night by patriciajj 39 weeks 6 days ago
As are your visits much: As are your visits much appreciated and muse-spiring. Continuing to sup and share of this rarity is something that opens and paves for generations after 
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patriciajj commented on: Untethered Night by patriciajj 39 weeks 6 days ago
It’s always a privilege when: It’s always a privilege when you show up and leave such amazing footprints. Huge respect and endless gratitude, blazing wordsmith. 
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S74rw4rd123d commented on: + 1ST POEMS: and the NEXT POEM PRAISES THE LORD by S74rw4rd-13d 39 weeks 6 days ago
And thanks for using my: And thanks for using my screen-name in your reply.  While it may seem like a small detail, it is an important one to me.  Your use of it is a mark of our continuing friendship.
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