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sweetwater commented on: England’s Best. (simple pleasures) by sweetwater 2 years 21 weeks ago
Thank you, I wrote it as the: Thank you, I wrote it as the thoughts came along, it was such a lovely day. :-)
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georgeschaefer commented on: VOLCANO by Pungus 2 years 21 weeks ago
vivid description here.  Good: vivid description here.  Good poem
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sweetwater commented on: One More Drop. by sweetwater 2 years 21 weeks ago
That's very kind of you. When: That's very kind of you. When I read your words I wish the same. Your Silent Song is so beautiful and Moonlight Falling is too, I can't write anything that comes anywhere near yours. I really should comment more, I read yours, Allets and Stephen's poems but don't often leave a comment. I must remember to say how good they are.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: FALSE ICONS AND THE LIKE by georgeschaefer 2 years 21 weeks ago
Interesting; also amusing in some manner: I love and appreciate deep reflections on cultural experiences. Especially popularized ones. I also learned something here about the real world road runner and coyote that I didn't know. That insight further exposes a symbolism in the whole ridiculous Roadrunner vs Wiley E. Coyote melodrama: The desperate and ever more hungry coyote participates in mass consumption of products from a huge corporation, hoping to fill a void that he had all the power to fill on his own. The product consumption actually interfered with the consumption he truly needed. It also swallowed up all of his time, to accomplish less. Perhaps there was a cryptic message that mostly went unnoticed by the audience of children. Or perhaps it was brainwash? I don't know. It's fascinating, though.   As for Fonzie, who was he cool to? The high school kids, mostly. Which makes sense. High school kids and young adults in westen society were immature, if not downright incompetent, in judging the world (and are arguably even more so, now, in our near-completely electric society). I should know, I was once one : ) He was probably one of the lesser harmful characters to carry an illusion we need not learn, but he was also the one that probably opened the door for mass messaging on this front: "Being smart and responsible is uncool." My generation was hit really hard by this message in the 1980's and early 90's. Saved by the Bell, probably the most popular Saturday show when I was a kid, as well as Friday's popular "Family Matters" both portrayed the most book smart person as being otherwise a total baffoon, and extremely uncool. The most positively portrayed characters - certainly in shows like Saved by the Bell - were the slackers who knew how they should look, but didn't give a damn how they should act towards others (Zach, most especially). As jobs were being shipped overseas and the world was about to move into a massive technological bump that meant less hardworking, responsible and intelligent people were needed (and would therefore only make competition for the ruling class), advertisers were very happy to support shows with these type of storylines.    I also think about how, by the late 80's, nearly every show was portrayed in an upper middle class to very rich home. Family Matters, to it's credit, was one of the few that didn't do this. So at least it had that redeeming quality. But whereas earlier television, for what little it could offer, largely focused around working class family scenarios, this shift towards wealthier portrayals was part of the steady and increasing erasure of the story of the working class and their struggle from media. Music would follow suit as the 90's came to an end. Even "The Fresh Prince", whose main character was a teenage boy from the projects, had his entire story instantly transported to a wealthy home in one of the richest areas of the country. This, of course, comes full circle the road runner and coyote, as well, as it only helps to encourage us to chase the carrot and seek a life of consumption.   Side note on Fonzie: His creeping on high school girls is fairly disturbing in our time, but back when that show was written, the legal age for such relations was only 14-16 across most of the U.S., so it does require some context in it's time (it is actually still 14-16 in some states, believe it or not). This was a left over echo from an agrarian time which was followed by world wars and the Great Depression, when people matured more quickly, due to great burdens when young, so sexually maturity was generally closely linked with adulthood. In many second and third world countries, it's still generally viewed this way, because a teenager might already be running a farm and tending to younger siblings like a parent. Historically, I would imagine, 15 year olds were probably a lot more mature than I was even at 25, and my family struggled relative to modern American standards. Obviously, none of this to excuse rising pedophilia movements, sex trafficking that runs through the halls of the richest and most poweful, and so on. I personally think the age of consent between adults should be risen to at least 21, due to how immature our society has become since the advent of television, than the internet, then smart phones and of course from mass consumption. 
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crypticbard commented on: Update by J4NU4R14N 2 years 21 weeks ago
And since April, 4700 posted: And since April, 4700 posted poems. Things may be looking up. Or so I am perceiving. Blessings.
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crypticbard commented on: Window of Opportunity by owlcrkbrg 2 years 21 weeks ago
That is so true. We now have: That is so true. We now have to go to the doctors every 42 days, me and the wife. And yes, the line 'maybe tomorrow' is an oft used one. Thanks for sharing.
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georgeschaefer commented on: FALSE ICONS AND THE LIKE by georgeschaefer 2 years 21 weeks ago
and we always focused on why: and we always focused on why he spent all the money on the Acme Corporation when he could have bought the food.  Turns out he could have caught the roadrunner without using any devices.
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georgeschaefer commented on: FRAGRANT JAVA by georgeschaefer 2 years 21 weeks ago
It starts off with the: It starts off with the fragrance as the coffee pot churns out the java
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georgeschaefer commented on: THE SCENT OF JASMINE by georgeschaefer 2 years 21 weeks ago
were you born yet?: were you born yet?
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Wordman commented on: One More Drop. by sweetwater 2 years 21 weeks ago
 Reading this late at night:  Reading this late at night is like finding a new star in the heavens, waiting for a wish, and mine being that I could write this well. 
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patriciajj commented on: Sanctuary of Flame by patriciajj 2 years 21 weeks ago
I truly reveled in your: I truly reveled in your profound and expansive interpretation, especially your contemplation on the pond. That was a poem in itself. Glorious! Thank you again and again, gifted poet.
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crypticbard commented on: Firefly Gazing by lyrycsyntyme 2 years 21 weeks ago
Melodious and astral reverie,: Melodious and astral reverie, stretching encompassing. The second half puts the poem in high gear like a slingshot on the outbounding flex. Where is tha fave button on this page?
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crypticbard commented on: FOOD TRUCKS by georgeschaefer 2 years 21 weeks ago
Perhaps a question could be: Perhaps a question could be asked if there is a Marie Antoinette in the palace these days. We grew up being fed Utopia and find selves in unrelenting Dystopia.
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crypticbard commented on: FALSE ICONS AND THE LIKE by georgeschaefer 2 years 21 weeks ago
The irony of it all is that I: The irony of it all is that I used to hang in there til the end just to see ole Coyote's look, pulling out a placard  and crashing to the bottom of the canyon with in a cloud ☁️. 
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crypticbard commented on: HEY NOW!! by georgeschaefer 2 years 21 weeks ago
That's their opinion and they: That's their opinion and they are entitled to at least that: those that find poets a royal pain, it's society's conscience that they feeding to the dogs by tossing out poetry, lol. A scathing write ✍️. Thanks for sharing, George.
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