PostPoems Be Artistic. Be Creative. Be Inspired!

Thanks So Much Starward! : Wishing you Wellness & Joy_()_

I agree with Pungus---this is: I agree with Pungus---this is an excellent reading experience.

I applaud the way you have: I applaud the way you have converted two constellations to the controlling metaphors of your poem.

Insane how we have strayed so: Insane how we have strayed so far from pure, natural state, that we delude ourselves into thinking "a better form of now" means we must firstly meet "a gateway to the Otherworld..." When will consciousness triumph over its crippling insecurities and self-doubt, and accept itself for what it is? While the farmers in the garden sweat to feed eternity, as it is and always will be.

A gift to read this: Stunning, delicately detailed, and I wouldn't hesitate to plunge myself into infinite pages.

Thank you, Sister Trish: When I titled the poem I admit I was a little daunted, even considering "straight jacket" to subtly suggest a shopping spree instead. just to keep my karma safe. But a proper Poet embraces, encourages even those possible dangers in order to stimulate their world-experiences as nourishment for the emotional content of their artistic expression. Unfortunately it commonly comes at the cost of their own sanity and well-being... RIP Robot

Thanks kindly, Ms Patricia.: Thanks kindly, Ms Patricia. One of those moments and days. Probably shifting gears with the seasons as well.