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burkej1h commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Thanks Be To God by S74rw4rd-13d 2 years 37 weeks ago
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burkej1h commented on: My pen is leaking by Teytonon 2 years 37 weeks ago
Graceful: Response neuter palis was pen retort.   enter paradises we called allot and made a remark talbot   ton was the vice and knew my mine would expect after dark when the late of the rise.     call ties I am sorted, and new did I bother to hue? A bunker belief if the shape wasn't new.   I had all the queens horses and all out of sort...   call the matter policia and tell her the Schwartz. finkle and fine with the waist I'm a dime, I call you at work but the line is submarine shorts.  You have all the remerol remeron viagra it was SHAVE 
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burkej1h commented on: Vicious Cycle by Tortured_Poet 2 years 37 weeks ago
I kept silent: Yet still it was expectation that regarded my thought Time flooded in and gazing at stars was something to do.   let us now therefore , no condemnation to those in Christ Jesus called according to his purpose.   for there is no forward thinking in the response of a madman is there?     we would keep to ourselves and had a long list of reasons.not y so we tried to tell ourself what it was that God really wanted from our lives.     search the response and make a query not an inquiry.  There is a significant difference.
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Tortured_Poet commented on: The meadow by chillin 2 years 37 weeks ago
I thought this was a creative: I thought this was a creative and fun piece! I enjoyed reading it and I love the style and scheme used. This is overall well written in my opinion. Thanks for sharing!
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georgeschaefer commented on: CLICHÉS OF WANNABE POETS AND PAINTERS by georgeschaefer 2 years 37 weeks ago
thank you: thank you
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patriciajj commented on: Beside the Still Fallen Sky by patriciajj 2 years 37 weeks ago
Thank you very much, fine: Thank you very much, fine wordsmith, for your validating and captivating reflections. I just read your latest poem and I'm still entranced.  So honored by your support.   
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patriciajj commented on: Willow Spirits in the Moonlight by Spinoza 2 years 37 weeks ago
You did it. You made the: You did it. You made the sublime happen, and now I have to go back and read it again so I can fully appreciate just how you made it happen.   I had so many transporting and intoxicating experiences from line to outstanding line that I was, in brief poetic ecstasy, right there under "the moon and Mercury", and between the "untamed spirits" and an enchantress worthy of making a mortal ask: "Am I a willow tree, or a howling cat/ I can not tell . . . "   Then, in a state of transcendental awe and with a wondrous, delicate touch,  you breathed poetry fit for the ages:   "and I am the owl that wakes from a dream to hoot at the rippled reflection of the moon   waiting for another late night conquest"   Bowing to your wizardry. Encore!  
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Starward commented on: You Were Very Tall by satishverma 2 years 37 weeks ago
Not entirely sure what this: Not entirely sure what this means, but I do like the format and the evocative tone of the language.
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Spinoza commented on: Beside the Still Fallen Sky by patriciajj 2 years 37 weeks ago
a common love: We share in our love of lakes and willows – and what lay above and below. Something magical therein dwells – to the woken eye. Be it night or day.
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Starward commented on: Willow Spirits in the Moonlight by Spinoza 2 years 37 weeks ago
The beauty---the magnificent,: The beauty---the magnificent, elegant and exquisite beauty---of this poem is so vast that a single reading cannot take it all in.  The verbal combinations, the images evoked, the setting described . . . all of these are so perfectly choreographed to create an overwhelming reading experience.  I have been reading poetry for fifty years, as of this past April, and I normally do not allow poems to have this kind of effect on me.  But . . . wow! . . . I feel like I did during my senior year in high school when I was first discovering Poetry's emotive effect on one's soul.  This poem is one PostPoem's very greatest ones.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Ramona's Spell by ramonathompsont 2 years 37 weeks ago
My spelling is fine. I am a: My spelling is fine. I am a full time professional author. I can edit my own work. Thanks!
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Starward commented on: The Fabulous Dream by satishverma 2 years 37 weeks ago
The accumulated phrases add: The accumulated phrases add up to a vision of almost unbearable sadness, but it is so elegantly stated in your usual format of nine brief lines.  
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Teytonon commented on: Clark can’t super can by Teytonon 2 years 37 weeks ago
I’m glad you enjoyed it..: I'm glad you enjoyed it. You thinks it's a cute write? Thank you Ramona. You know why that is? Because it comes from a cute writer. You know what makes me a cute writer? I know all the angles. To be honest, I actually don't know all the angles. There are some I don't know, but am willing to try. I'll try any angle. I'm a cute 'try angle' writer. Sometimes I'm not a cute 'try angle' writer.There are times when I'm obtuse. When that happens I'm an 'obtuse try angle' writer. But that only happens in the summer usually. Only when it's above 90 degrees. If it stays below 90 degrees I'll remain an..a cute 'try angle' Right? Er..  
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Spinoza commented on: the weeping ghosts by Spinoza 2 years 37 weeks ago
The Cycles of Time: There is always the great renewal of cycles, and so many cycles there are – both big and small – across our own lifetimes and beyond.  
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Spinoza commented on: the weeping ghosts by Spinoza 2 years 37 weeks ago
Sometimes: Sometimes I get in the habit of compression. But I don’t want to get too overly reliant on it, as I sometimes do. I still find great joy, sitting with something for weeks, months or years – and just letting it ruminate and ferment. Or until I’ve gotten to the right place in my life, to say it properly. And sometimes, that requires letting yourself age too.
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