When injustice tangles my
lifeline
between here
and what is real,
I awaken to
the ordinary,
the everyday,
the devotion of
mountain laurels—
how could I have
missed them?
And the robins
throwing flames around
their twisted villages,
the hemlock
like ghostly brides:
it all appears
when the mind and the
rain-washed air
are one,
when the wind is
theater I want to
know personally—
a gateway to the
Otherworld or just
a better form
of now,
where the scent is
feverish activity,
where countless
tiny lives join
countless others in the
single goal to
just be here.
They know what ambition is,
and it has nothing to do
with the things
I care about.
And now they are
drawing me into
their tin chants,
their sky, their love,
their beliefs,
now rage is a waste
of limited strength in a
limited life,
resentment just
another hissing spark
on the river that
spits out the
fallen sky
and grumbles for me,
and I wonder if it's wise
to pray while the
river is teaching,
and if God,
who loves in a way
I never could, wrote
this epic of birth and death
and mystery in between,
then how should I speak
when the oaks
said it best
long before I was born?
So I'll enter the
silence
and sit in a chapel
of grass
along with the crane who
thinks he is God,
and a thousand sun-gorged
quiet marvels,
and I'll step out of my
old shattered self
and stare and please God
with my wonder,
till the earth is small
again—
a cluster of jewel tones
and souls
sharing the vastness,
a prayer
from this point of view.
Patricia Joan Jones
Insane how we have strayed so
bananas are the perfect food
for prostitutes
Thank you for your piercing
Thank you for your piercing and insightful reflections on the fallacies consciousness swallows and struggles with while it could find peace if it would "accept itself for what it is". Always an honor when you stop by with words of life-altering wisdom.
Had to read this again and
Had to read this again and again it still packs a thump! Skillful!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I'm moved and honored to see
I'm moved and honored to see you back. Thank you so much!
Just lovely! if only we knew,
Just lovely! if only we knew, but then glad we don't this is a great vantage point to lift a prayer from, the quiet multitudes of miracles Un noted day after day. Yeah, you're brilliant like that! Hugss and best blessings ss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
A resounding "Thank you!" for
A resounding "Thank you!" for your profound and eloquent reflection. You're bursting with brilliance yourself, dear poet.
This prayer could be part of
This prayer could be part of a formal worship service; it is a modern-day psalm in every sense of the word. And it contains one of your most magnificent phrases, "and souls / sharing the vastness." Wow. I truly believe that even if I forgot my own name, or where I left my keys, I would still remember youe profound poems, and your very intense phrases that convey such deep meaning. I believe you are one of the Great Stars of postpoems.
Starward
That just may be greatest
That just may be greatest compliment anyone has ever given my work. And it came from a poet l highly regard. What could I possibly say? A million times: thank you!
Images Rock Here
”...the wind is theater...” miraculous line!
Thank you so much for that
Thank you so much for that thrilling feedback!
Yes it is. Her poems contain
Yes it is. Her poems contain many memorable phrases. She should have her own quotation book in libraries across the land.
Starward
Epic encouragement from a
Epic encouragement from a fine poet. You made my day, no, my week. Countless thank you's.
Thank you so much! I value
Thank you so much! I value your opinion. Patricia
life is a mystery that man
life is a mystery that man can not copy or understand
ron parrish
Thank you for your insights.
Thank you for your insights. Well said. Patricia
you`re welcome
you`re welcome
ron parrish