Another Kind of Prayer

When injustice tangles my

lifeline

between here

and what is real,

 

I awaken to 

the ordinary,

the everyday,

the devotion of

mountain laurels—

 

how could I have 

missed them?

 

And the robins

throwing flames around 

their twisted villages,

the hemlock

like ghostly brides:

 

it all appears

when the mind and the

rain-washed air

are one,

when the wind is

theater I want to

know personally— 

a gateway to the 

Otherworld or just

a better form

of now,

 

where the scent is

feverish activity,

where countless 

tiny lives join

countless others in the 

single goal to 

just be here.

 

They know what ambition is,

and it has nothing to do

with the things

I care about.

 

And now they are

drawing me into

their tin chants,

their sky, their love,

their beliefs,

 

now rage is a waste

of limited strength in a 

limited life,

resentment just

another hissing spark

on the river that 

spits out the

fallen sky

and grumbles for me,

 

and I wonder if it's wise

to pray while the

river is teaching,

 

and if God, 

who loves in a way 

I never could, wrote

this epic of birth and death

and mystery in between,

 

then how should I speak

when the oaks

said it best

long before I was born?

 

So I'll enter the

silence

and sit in a chapel

of grass

along with the crane who

thinks he is God,

and a thousand sun-gorged

quiet marvels,

 

and I'll step out of my

old shattered self

and stare and please God

with my wonder,

 

till the earth is small

again— 

 

a cluster of jewel tones

and souls

sharing the vastness,

 

a prayer

 

from this point of view.

 

Patricia Joan Jones 

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Insane how we have strayed so

Insane how we have strayed so far from pure, natural state, that we delude ourselves into thinking "a better form of now" means we must firstly meet "a gateway to the Otherworld..." When will consciousness triumph over its crippling insecurities and self-doubt, and accept itself for what it is? While the farmers in the garden sweat to feed eternity, as it is and always will be.

bananas are the perfect food

for prostitutes

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Thank you for your piercing

Thank you for your piercing and insightful reflections on the fallacies consciousness swallows and struggles with while it could find peace if it would "accept itself for what it is". Always an honor when you stop by with words of life-altering wisdom. 

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Had to read this again and

Had to read this again and again it still packs a thump! Skillful!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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I'm moved and honored to see

I'm moved and honored to see you back. Thank you so much!

 
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Just lovely! if only we knew,

Just lovely! if only we knew, but then glad we don't  this is a great vantage point to lift a prayer from, the quiet multitudes of miracles Un noted day after day.   Yeah, you're brilliant like that! Hugss and best blessings ss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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A resounding "Thank you!" for

A resounding "Thank you!" for your profound and eloquent reflection. You're bursting with brilliance yourself, dear poet.

 
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This prayer could be part of

This prayer could be part of a formal worship service; it is a modern-day psalm in every sense of the word.  And it contains one of your most magnificent phrases, "and souls / sharing the vastness."  Wow.  I truly believe that even if I forgot my own name, or where I left my keys, I would still remember youe profound poems, and your very intense phrases that convey such deep meaning.  I believe you are one of the Great Stars of postpoems. 


Starward

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That just may be greatest

That just may be greatest compliment anyone has ever given my work. And it came from a poet l highly regard. What could I possibly say? A million times: thank you! 

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Images Rock Here

”...the wind is theater...” miraculous line!


 

 

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Thank you so much for that

Thank you so much for that thrilling feedback! 

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Yes it is.  Her poems contain

Yes it is.  Her poems contain many memorable phrases.  She should have her own quotation book in libraries across the land.


Starward

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Epic encouragement from a

Epic encouragement from a fine poet. You made my day, no, my week. Countless thank you's. 

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Thank you so much! I value

Thank you so much! I value your opinion. Patricia

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life is a mystery that man

life is a mystery that man can not copy or understand


ron parrish

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Thank you for your insights.

Thank you for your insights. Well said. Patricia

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you`re welcome

you`re welcome


ron parrish