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Tortured_Poet commented on: Heard Enough by uninvited_1 1 year 48 weeks ago
Very powerful write and sad.: Very powerful write and sad. I feel like this one can be relatable to so many different people, really well written.
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Tortured_Poet commented on: Crawl by uninvited_1 1 year 48 weeks ago
I like your style in this: I like your style in this piece, reminds me of a Linkin park song. Very cool
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Tortured_Poet commented on: Pain is a memory by SSmoothie 1 year 48 weeks ago
Woah this one seems like it: Woah this one seems like it could be a metal song or something, your choice of words and flow are inspiring. Great write!
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Tortured_Poet commented on: Tumble by SSmoothie 1 year 48 weeks ago
I like the style of this one: I like the style of this one and how descriptive you are with how you describe the experience and emotion. 
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Tortured_Poet commented on: A message for a friend by SSmoothie 1 year 48 weeks ago
Wow. I found this very: Wow. I found this very profound and expressive. Kind of felt like it could be a song. 
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crypticbard commented on: not all that glisters is gold by redbrick 1 year 48 weeks ago
And regrowing is quite what: And regrowing is quite what we need at certain junctions of life. Thanks Pungus
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crypticbard commented on: not all that glisters is gold by redbrick 1 year 48 weeks ago
Thank you Patricia. Your much: Thank you Patricia. Your much welcome comment is very encouraging.
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Starward commented on: Incarnation by LornaRJ 1 year 48 weeks ago
This is another excellent: This is another excellent summary of the Nativity events.  I would question, however, your statement that "It wasn;t well organized."  That directly contradicts the last line of the preceding stanza, and also implies a criticism of God's exact plan for accomplishing all this.  
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Starward commented on: Forgiveness by LornaRJ 1 year 48 weeks ago
This is excellent!: This is excellent!
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Starward commented on: Jesus in Gethsemane by LornaRJ 1 year 48 weeks ago
I am sorry for the glitch that opened a second comment.: I am sorry for the glitch that opened a second comment.  Please delete.  I did not mean to clutter up this poem's comment section.
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Starward commented on: Jesus in Gethsemane by LornaRJ 1 year 48 weeks ago
This is a very unique: This is a very unique perspective on Gethsemane.
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Pungus commented on: not all that glisters is gold by redbrick 1 year 48 weeks ago
Throne for nature to regrow: An earthquake rumbles- Tumble, crumble, rubble
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patriciajj commented on: the serpent by Spinoza 1 year 48 weeks ago
I wanted to read this: I wanted to read this captivating, sly and jolting statement a few times because your strategy is very effective. The message is underscored by your brilliant choice of structure and voice; the sparse lines speak with an ominous, serpentine perception and coil around our consciousness in the blink of an eye. A shrewd and farsighted wake-up call. Love it!        
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patriciajj commented on: not all that glisters is gold by redbrick 1 year 48 weeks ago
A vivid and refined analogy: A vivid and refined analogy that illustrates the desirability of what is simple and natural over human definitions of opulence. Another brilliant perspective. 
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Starward commented on: One Bullet Ended It All by randyjohnson 1 year 48 weeks ago
While the poem definitely: While the poem definitely presents a cautiomary tale, it should be posted, perhaps, well after the holiday and not this close to the holiday's arrival.
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