@ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Love Poem For C-Wave

For you, I rename a certain star:  C-Source,

perhaps in the vicinity of Chiron, the man-horse,

and appropriately endowed---like you, of course.

Loving you, I think of the stars' effulgent lights,

that warms their planets' days and illumine the nights.


Starward*Led

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I believe that Chiron taught Achilles and Patroclus to love each other, and how to express that intmately.

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Where Love Becomes Its Own Constellation

The star imagery in this piece does several things at once:

 

• Renaming a star gives the beloved a place in the heavens.  

• Effulgent lights evokes brilliance, warmth, and spiritual radiance.  

• The warmth that “warms their planets’ days and illumine the nights” eluding that the other’s influence is both sustaining and guiding.

 

This for me is a classic poetic move in the PostPoems Universe: comparing love to celestial light, but the piece personalizes it by naming a specific star and tying it to a mythic constellation.

 

And I'm keeping my title up there above this comment.

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Thanks for that excellent

Thanks for that excellent explication of the poem!


Starward-Led (in Chrismation, Januarius)