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S74rw4rd commented on: INTERPRETIVE DANCE WITH WORDS by georgeschaefer 2 years 22 weeks ago
I agree.  I like the Russian: I agree.  I like the Russian Orthodox concept of the holy fool---it can be extreme (and, when abused, results in freaks like Rasputin). but it also gives a purpose to our foibles and failures.  At this late stage of my life, that is a comfort to me.
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georgeschaefer commented on: INTERPRETIVE DANCE WITH WORDS by georgeschaefer 2 years 22 weeks ago
We are all (myself included): We are all (myself included) subject to human folly.  That makes fools of all of us.  But fools often dance deliriously like whirling dervishes uncertain but hopeful of finding some pittance of enlightenment--or some such tomfoolery.
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S74rw4rd commented on: Sweet Eyes by fo0l4u 2 years 22 weeks ago
This is excellent, and that: This is excellent, and that final line should be in the quotation books.
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Pungus commented on: UTTERLY DUMBFOUNDED by Pungus 2 years 22 weeks ago
Touché: Touché
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S74rw4rd commented on: OPAQUE IDEAS by georgeschaefer 2 years 22 weeks ago
This really resonated with: This really resonated with me, today.  Applause . . . .
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S74rw4rd commented on: Mother II by rachel 2 years 22 weeks ago
Mine was the opposite: Mine was the opposite problem:  my mother suspected I would try to linger in my parents' home well after I was able to become self-supporting.
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georgeschaefer commented on: READING RIMBAUD IN LUCID LIGHT by georgeschaefer 2 years 22 weeks ago
For a guy who retired at 19,: For a guy who retired at 19, he casts a pretty broad shadow
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ramonathompsont commented on: Say My Name, and Remember by giajl 2 years 22 weeks ago
another awesome one: another awesome one
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ramonathompsont commented on: The Road is Long.... by giajl 2 years 22 weeks ago
brought tears to my eyes.: brought tears to my eyes. very moving!   Well done!
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S74rw4rd commented on: INTERPRETIVE DANCE WITH WORDS by georgeschaefer 2 years 22 weeks ago
I should like to think I am: I should like to think I am not a fool (although I know some might dispute this), but this is Poetry, you are writing.  Its authenticity is obvious, and no deceit enters into the designation.
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djtj commented on: First Kiss by Beatnik1979 2 years 22 weeks ago
Great: Great story.
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S74rw4rd commented on: clean your combs by Pungus 2 years 23 weeks ago
To the best of my knowledge,: To the best of my knowledge, Eliot did not use drugs.  He did drink, sometimes heavily, although my impression was that he got that under control by 1927 when he entered the Church of England.  His first wife, Vivienne, became addicted to opium due to mis-diagnosis of her medical conditions.  Because so many decades have passed since my formal study of Eliot, and because there is far more known about his life now than in the seventies, I searched the net and found no specific mention, or even a speculation, that he had used opium.
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S74rw4rd commented on: THANKFUL FOR THE STARS by joy 2 years 23 weeks ago
I have been reading Poetry: I have been reading Poetry for decades, and have never seen a poem exactly like this one in its use of the stars.
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georgeschaefer commented on: GATEKEEPERS by georgeschaefer 2 years 23 weeks ago
Thank you.  There was always: Thank you.  There was always a lot of bullshit dealing with the poetry gatekeepers back in the small press days but there are still a lot of tyrants in the online poetry communities.  Quality can be a purely subjective matter. Also, a lot of poems that may not be good or great in a classical or technical sense were important and cathartic for the author to write and sometimes find an audience that also finds value in it.
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S74rw4rd commented on: thoughts I keep from my father by arielle 2 years 23 weeks ago
The emotional intensity of: The emotional intensity of this poem is just off the charts!  It is so powerful!!
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