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crypticbard commented on: At Acts 11:26 by Seryddwr 1 year 38 weeks ago
Something that each must: Something that each must personally, intentionally and existentially work through; each being at varying points along the journey of reckoning.
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crypticbard commented on: Some things go Unsaid by WasteOfPaint 1 year 38 weeks ago
And if only there was a way: And if only there was a way to say what is left unsaid... oh wait... there is! And this poem is definitely one of those ways. And a far more useful way to charge our thought-filled days! Thanks for sharing.
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Starward commented on: Vixen by WasteOfPaint 1 year 38 weeks ago
Now I am ashamed of myself: Now I am ashamed of myself for commenting in that way.  Please forgive me.
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crypticbard commented on: Daft Illusion by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 38 weeks ago
This paints a different: This paints a different picture from what my mind and reading conjure but perhaps are more linked than what first appears on the surface. I saw Iron Man and his cohort and the whole range pov of society and the cosmos. Of course there's that and the dollar generating factor of the MCU. And this is a reading of only one viewpoint of your ironclad poem. 
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crypticbard commented on: cure alls by redbrick 1 year 38 weeks ago
That image fits like a glove!: That image fits like a glove! And I've witnessed firsthand the demise of over watered cacti
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WasteOfPaint commented on: Vixen by WasteOfPaint 1 year 38 weeks ago
Thanks, this was one I had a: Thanks, this was one I had a little fun with, I acknowledge it's not my best
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Starward commented on: star signed by redbrick 1 year 38 weeks ago
I love poems with: I love poems with astronomical material, and this poem is wonderful.
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Starward commented on: Vixen by WasteOfPaint 1 year 38 weeks ago
Although some of the rhymes: Although some of the rhymes feel forced, the overall poem is quite a reading experience.
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crypticbard commented on: WELL, WELL, WELL, by georgeschaefer 1 year 39 weeks ago
...and every little bit of it: ...and every little bit of it goes a long long way!
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: ALLETS ON Y VA by AngryLaughter 1 year 39 weeks ago
Hey, forgive me, but do you: Hey, forgive me, but do you know what happened to Stella?
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Critically Aware by anexod 1 year 39 weeks ago
Powerful: "The five stars you can see from My yard start to give off their barely visible glow So faint, that's how a city makes you feel If you let it get to you"   Having grown up in a big city, I not only fully get the "five stars" reference, I know that the sentiments you express - "so faint, that's how a city makes you feel.." - are ones that quite a few friends and acquaintances experienced. The way you make the comparison, with even such majestic and raging sources of light as stars being all but drowned out in the city, is the peak point of what is a fantastic poem, end to end.   I only wish to have come across this sooner. It's an instant favorite.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Footnote: Stars' Distance by Seryddwr 1 year 39 weeks ago
You're welcome : ): You're welcome : )
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Starward commented on: Footnote: Stars' Distance by Seryddwr 1 year 39 weeks ago
I certainly agree.  Thanks: I certainly agree.  Thanks for the comment . . .  much appreciated.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Footnote: Stars' Distance by Seryddwr 1 year 39 weeks ago
Yet there are those who will: Yet there are those who will try to "link" the stars. Pride, indeed, causes memory loss when it comes to recalling just how small we are.    
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Starward commented on: Footnote: Stars' Distance by Seryddwr 1 year 39 weeks ago
Despite the delay in my: Despite the delay in my reply, I really do appreciate your words.  Even on the most dismal day, your comments can perk me right up.
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