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williamjroneyiii commented on: I'm At Peace My Friend by williamjroneyiii 1 year 39 weeks ago
I'm At Peace My Friend: I believe all creatures have a souls, Horses, Dogs and Cats ect.   "Search And Seizure" My hands hurt, from doing the deed. Rolling joints and smoking weed.   My head is light, my eyes are red.     The cops show up to search the crib. They search the place from front and back.   The puppy lays on my black bag. They praised the dog for what she found! I had to turn the music down. William J. Roney III Copyright (C) 2019 The Dog is smart, she has a soul. The ribbon was blue, not solid gold. All creatures go to Heaven, that's my belief! My paper is ready to receive!   
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williamjroneyiii commented on: It Seems To Be Revised by williamjroneyiii 1 year 39 weeks ago
It Seems To Be: I know what you mean but looks are everthing, it seems to me!
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williamjroneyiii commented on: Amazon Product Review USPS by williamjroneyiii 1 year 39 weeks ago
Re: USPS: It's too late to take on a new job, Thank You!!!
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Amazon Product Review USPS by williamjroneyiii 1 year 39 weeks ago
If you keep at it, Amazon can: If you keep at it, Amazon can fire their whole marketing team and just lean on you.
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Wordman commented on: Restless by Wordman 1 year 40 weeks ago
Thank you Patricia, for the: Thank you Patricia, for the very kind words, and the visit, I'm glad you found this to your liking. 
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crypticbard commented on: cure alls by redbrick 1 year 40 weeks ago
And as always, a most welcome: And as always, a most welcome review that opens up tree-lined avenues to further expeditions into poetic expression. And onward in the journey of extrication from these all too easy 'cure alls.'A curious aside as well, 'panacea' was to be part of the title but chose against utlising that for a more accessible title. My gratitude dear PatriciaJJ.
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rachel commented on: The Clarity After Waking From A Long Dream by rachel 1 year 40 weeks ago
Thank you: It was exhausting to write
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Starward commented on: The Clarity After Waking From A Long Dream by rachel 1 year 40 weeks ago
The poem's emotional impact: The poem's emotional impact is powerful, and its last three lines are profoundly wise and deserve to be studied by many.
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patriciajj commented on: One Spark is a Galaxy by patriciajj 1 year 40 weeks ago
It was a supreme pleasure to: It was a supreme pleasure to write this. Thank you as well. 
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patriciajj commented on: Uneven breaths by SSmoothie 1 year 40 weeks ago
This majestic heartsong: This majestic heartsong blooms as it grows brighter and brighter; each line is a bud, opening a new surprise until it pulls out the final gift.   "And I danced like a flame When I resonated through you"   A precious, quotable micropoem within the poem.   And that twist at the end: priceless! That last line, sparkling with bold, lighthearted wit, expresses lasting devotion as well.    You shine!
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patriciajj commented on: Restless by Wordman 1 year 40 weeks ago
"the howling wind bullies: "the howling wind bullies this night to tears"   Fiercely imaginative! Your entire depiction seizes the experience of being at war with a brutal, endless night. The storm, as both physical atmosphere and a metaphor for the inner struggle, is almost audible. A memorable work of art.   
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Starward commented on: One Spark is a Galaxy by patriciajj 1 year 40 weeks ago
Thank you for the reply, and,: Thank you for the reply, and, let me say again---gladly---thank you for the poem; but, moreso, thank you for your Poetry which is so essential to this site.  
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Rebecca commented on: The voice beyond midnight. by Bec.J 1 year 40 weeks ago
Thank you, I really: Thank you, I really appreciate you taking time to read my poem. Unfortunately, despair is an all too familiar feeling. Sometimes overwhelming, I try to focus on building a better version of myself every day :)
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patriciajj commented on: One Spark is a Galaxy by patriciajj 1 year 40 weeks ago
Having no words is the: Having no words is the sincerest compliment, and I accept it with the deepest gratitude.   I feel that you deserve recognition for your valuable contribution to others, some you are probably not even aware of. Perhaps on a higher plane of existence, you'll fully appreciate the positive impact you've had on "strangers", whether it was your creative ability that gave them a moment's respite from their troubles, an insightful and uplifting comment that reassured them of their value, spiritual inspiration that reminded them of what their soul is up to in this world or acceptance of whatever life path they needed to follow.   My only concern about this poem was that, as you pointed out, mortal words would cast a pale shadow of ultimate truth.   Peace and brightest blessings.
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patriciajj commented on: The voice beyond midnight. by Bec.J 1 year 40 weeks ago
The declaration "I no longer: The declaration "I no longer want to feed the darkness" is a powerfully stated and highly self-aware breakaway that shows great strength of character. Most of us, at least at times, find it easy to get caught in a loop of destructive self talk, but your advice is the first, unavoidable step toward recovery.   A life-altering progression from despair to hope. Wonderful, valuable work.      
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