Where Pythagoras meets divine design,
Three points unite, a triangle unfolds;
Ancient wisdom intertwined with lines,
Beauty born of numbers, a story untold.
Three points unite, a triangle unfolds;
Kepler's vision, a cosmic embrace;
Beauty born of numbers, a story untold,
In the spiral's dance, a human face.
Kepler's vision, a cosmic embrace;
Imperfect symmetry, perfectly true;
In the spiral's dance, a human face,
Flawed and faceted, yet shining through.
Imperfect symmetry, perfectly true;
Where Pythagoras meets divine design;
Flawed and faceted, yet shining through;
Ancient wisdom intertwined with lines.
This is such a fantastic poem
This is such a fantastic poem that only Patricia's comment can explicate it as it deserves.
Coerulescent [fka Starward]
Thank you
Starward, thank you. It really does mean so much. Please find the same message of appreciation in my response to patriciajj. I do apologise for being absent recently.
Alliswend bin ich nicht, doch vie list mir bewußt.
Sorry I haven't been around
Sorry I haven't been around much, but things have been hectic and demanding for me lately.
The brilliance of this poem is its illustrative structure and symmetry that gracefully captures the fascinating metaphysics hidden in plain sight everywhere in nature. The cadence is captivating and the theme something that has intrigued me for some time.
It takes extraordinary creativity and insight to not only explore, but to breathe poetic life into a subject where science and spirit intersect and perhaps even give us a glimpse of the mathematical process of creation itself.
A sublime, mind-bending and immersive experience.
Completely understood
Hi Patriciajj,
Thank you so much for your exceptionally well crafted and poignant response that I am not sure I am worthy of. No need to apologise, I hadn't seen you around here or on AP for so long, so I naturally started to worry.
I completely understand how incredibly busy, messy and complicated life can be. I have been having a similar time of it at them moment and signs are that it appears only to get more hectic for the remainder of the year. That being said, it’s great to hear from you and whilst you owe me nothing, I’m thrilled that you are well.
I feel blessed that you found the structure and symmetry engaging—it’s such a joy to explore those intersections between science and spirit - perhaps more so after a poetry publication tells you they are no good. I mean, I can do that anywhere and at any time!
Your feedback, I admire, was expertly timed, and I also confess I was so moved by it that it has taken me a while to try to convey my appreciation in a manner befitting. So, I have taken the plunge this evening to thank you and how happy I was that you enjoyed the cadence and theme. It’s always rewarding when someone connects with the deeper layers of one’s work. I truly appreciate you sharing your thoughts, and I’m delighted to hear that it provided you and Starward with such an immersive experience. I left some comments for you on AP, and whilst I may not be here as regularly as I’d like, I look forward to more of our exchanges when things settle down for us both.
Alliswend bin ich nicht, doch vie list mir bewußt.