Japonism

Hanakotoba (An Ode To Subliminal Vases)








Hanakotoba (An Ode To Subliminal Vases)

 

 

 

i like the planters

and the natural

growth in

these woodland

 

but

the flowers

in our

foresty shadows

 

i never understood

 

what helps

perhaps in understanding

these phenomena

 

is to let the

drift of air

find its way

like a bird finding

 

its food








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Author's Notes/Comments: 

Reedited 11.02.2022 [04:20]; 11.01.2022 [06:26]:

 

Added "(but, of course)" for clarifying what I was meaning & to create a more

fluid free-verse composition according to my current whim and drift.  Also, I have added some more hashtags/tags (e.g., kataware-doki, kataware doki, Zen Buddhism [two words], and tebineri, esp. rustic beauty to emphasize what I have meant by some of its thematic relations/topics that I indirectly/directly broached).  Thank you.

 

2. Upon rechecking & reviewing if there is anything that I missed, I found "subtance" to be a misspelled word and & an error which is on my part.  Therefore, I apologize for this mistake (it has now been corrected.)

 

 

Uncorrected form of the verse:

 

"Every mark, marked

in its subtance;

people's irritable
lifestyles, their suns!"

 

 

2. b.  Added another hashtag "#rusticity"