Reedited 11.02.2022 [04:20]; 11.01.2022 [06:26]:
Added "(but, of course)" for clarifying what I was meaning & to create a more
fluid free-verse composition according to my current whim and drift. Also, I have added some more hashtags/tags (e.g., kataware-doki, kataware doki, Zen Buddhism [two words], and tebineri, esp. rustic beauty to emphasize what I have meant by some of its thematic relations/topics that I indirectly/directly broached). Thank you.
2. Upon rechecking & reviewing if there is anything that I missed, I found "subtance" to be a misspelled word and & an error which is on my part. Therefore, I apologize for this mistake (it has now been corrected.)
Uncorrected form of the verse:
"Every mark, marked
in its subtance;
people's irritable
lifestyles, their suns!"
2. b. Added another hashtag "#rusticity"