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lyrycsyntyme commented on: The Ravaging Illness by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 13 weeks ago
Thank you very much,: Thank you very much, Patricia. I try to use poems like these to challenge and test the limits of my perception and beliefs, and see what holds up and where I could grow. It's a great blessing when the words strike someone else, too. Especially someone with the dignity and grace you demonstrate.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: War Porn by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 13 weeks ago
Thanks for sharing that: Thanks for sharing that experience, Starward. My dad was in Vietnam, and it really wasn't till the 70's that there was enough push back to drive some of these methods out of the school system. Though I think it also had to do with a shift away from drafts and transforming most of the public into mass consumers. Schooling took on a new task, which was to train people to spend their money, instead of their lives. But there was always that backdrop which remained - it was far more subtle for me and my classmates than for yours. We had the ROTC presence in High School, and officers began visiting our classes as early as 6th grade.   Of course, on the television I recall very well how heavy the war porn was for the Persian Gulf War. "This Scuds For You", for example. Comedy, such as pitiful shows like the Simpsons, played a big role in promoting Saddam Hussein as some sort of unique and particular anti-christ that we had to stop and kill (meanwhile we killed countless thousands of peasants around him, and he thrived for another decade and change). Post-9/11/01, it was far worse. That was what sold me on throwing out the television (well, it wasn't mine to throw out, so I just stopped watching). I've never owned a television, actually. I was just reaching the age where I would be buying one, and the constant repetition of showing a plane crashing into World Trade Center Tower 2 convinced me that would be unhealthy to do so. It made Genesis (the band) into prophets anew: "Now you never did see such a terrible thing, as you'd seen last night on the t/v. Maybe if we're lucky they will show it again, such a terrible thing to see!" Greatest choice I ever made, I'm certain.    
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patriciajj commented on: Zoey The Ghostwatcher, And Mrs. Brown, The Ghost by S74RW4RD 1 year 13 weeks ago
I'm convinced that dogs are: I'm convinced that dogs are angels with fur and that they percieve more than we realize. I was so heartbroken to read about Zoey's decline.    So sorry I'm not around much. Things have been crazy lately. Every blessing to you. 
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S74rw4rd commented on: War Porn by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 13 weeks ago
During my childhood in the: During my childhood in the sixties, we were subjected to all kinds of war porn in support of the conflict in Viet Nam.  In second grade, many of us boys asked for, and received from our parents, small "green berets" during the time that particular ballad was on the radio.  In my school, our third grade gym teacher was a former Marine and he wasted at least a quarter of each gyn class hour teaching us to respond to his shouts like TenHut and ParadeRest, and so forth.  Even in Cub Scouts, and, later, my two years in Scouting, there was an intensely militaristic "vibe" in everything we were taught and required to do; that vive, and, also, a tacit demand for conformity.  Even when I went up to college, my parents were dismayed that I attend class in bell-bottom jeans and, on balmy days, flipflops instead of shoes and socks.  
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Wordman commented on: As Is by Wordman 1 year 13 weeks ago
Hello Patricia, thanks for: Hello Patricia, thanks for the nice critique, glad you found this little bit of temper to your liking. I'll go back to reading happy ending stories, and leave reality to a younger generation, it's easier to smile that way. Thanks again, it's always a pleasure. 
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S74rw4rd commented on: Zoey The Ghostwatcher, And Mrs. Brown, The Ghost by S74RW4RD 1 year 13 weeks ago
Thank you very much for: Thank you very much for commenting on this small tale about the smallest member of my family, yet one who is so big-hearted.  Yes, she was traumatized and never ventured up there again.  When we first rescued Zoey, she could not climb up the three front porch steps at the residence in which we were then living.  By the time we brought my mother to live with us, in the larger house, she could almost leap up the steps to the bookroom, and, on the afternoon of the sighting, she came down those steps with equal speed.      Zoey also had a way of diagnosing us when we are facing an illness.  She would approach whichever one of us was sick, and just sit and stare into our eyes, as if she was obsessing over something.  Within twenty-four hours or less, whichever one of us was stared at became ill.  She has a fairly accurate record with that, until recently.  Now she is lame and tired all the time, and sleeps most of the day and night.       When I was thirteen, my parents bought me a very pedigreed cocker spaniel pup, jet black, whom I named Monica, and with whom I bonded immediately.  She could read all of my moods.  Twelve years later, she developed a stomach cancer, and the vet wanted to put her down.  I asked him how long she might have to live, and he said a matter of three or four months.  I asked him if she was in pain, and he said no, and even demonstrated by pressing her abdomen and she did not respond.  He said it would eventually become too painful for her to stretch out on the flloor.  I told him if he thought she had three or four months, we would give it to her and bring her in only upon the very first indication of pain.  That was in the summer of 1983; Monica lived until late May of 1986.  She had stretched out that May morning and began to whimper, so, while I was at work, my father took her to the vet.  I never thought I would ever meet another dog as empathetic as Monica was, until I met Zoey.  
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patriciajj commented on: As Is by Wordman 1 year 13 weeks ago
You took the emotions right: You took the emotions right out of my heart and crafted them into pulsing, grinding brilliance, not unlike blues music, but with soul-clutching poetic expertise.   So many ravishing lines here, particularly the ones Cascade pointed out as well as: "believable ignorance".   So true and relevant! You nailed it with charisma and prowess.   You may call it rambling;  I call it bold and fiery art. 
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patriciajj commented on: Zoey The Ghostwatcher, And Mrs. Brown, The Ghost by S74RW4RD 1 year 13 weeks ago
Knowing you, your collection: Knowing you, your collection of books was amazing, so perhaps Mrs. Brown just wanted to take a peek.   What a fascinating story. Sometimes real life experience is more compelling than fiction, especially when narrated with skill.   Just sorry little Zoey was traumatized.      
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patriciajj commented on: hold your applause by humanfruit 1 year 13 weeks ago
This explosion of creativity: This explosion of creativity rocked me, challenged me, stunned me. Edgy, frenetic and tragic . . . and the way you spilled your thoughts: absolutely brilliant. Simply must applaud!  
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patriciajj commented on: The Ravaging Illness by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 13 weeks ago
An urgent call for a more: An urgent call for a more egalitarian, a more civilized, worldview. I was struck by your inventive, poignant and visionary approach to the subject. Nothing stale or preachy here! Perhaps it all begins in the heart of a true Poet.    Well said!     
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patriciajj commented on: THANKFUL FOR APACHE BLESSING by joy 1 year 13 weeks ago
With a delicate, honest and: With a delicate, honest and stirring whisper of indigenous eloquence, you wove something precious. I truly was blessed!  
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SaraMariaRaphael444 commented on: Tears of a Decaf Drinker by SaraMariaRaphael444 1 year 13 weeks ago
Thank you!: Thank you for your kind words, much appreciated. ☺️
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ramonathompsont commented on: Tears of a Decaf Drinker by SaraMariaRaphael444 1 year 13 weeks ago
perfection. so much emotion: perfection. so much emotion captured in just a few words. bravo!
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life_used_to_be... commented on: Memory by RainerBukowski 1 year 13 weeks ago
Nostalgia is quite like a: Nostalgia is quite like a grain of sand isn't it? How something so light can be so heavy, I will never know. Amazing write. I am so happy that you still write.    Whatever brought you to the writing of this poem.... I do hope the fleeting memory at least brings a smile or two.  
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Teytonon commented on: GREATEST LEGS by georgeschaefer 1 year 13 weeks ago
Czech girls walking… : Czech girls walking No brassiere  Czechs are bouncing In no rush  For them to clear
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