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As Is
hollow oceans
landscapes of hell
whispered hatred
lies at the yell
human malfunctions
we all lay dead
sorry at the ready
tongues cruel shred
tomorrow was yesterday
you missed your turn
you failed it miserably
your ass got burned
pay for your future
stay forever in debt
was it really worth it
have you renaissanced yet?
ramblings win awards
apocalyptic peace
believable ignorance
a cute press release
looks like it’s over
it was a hell of a ride
the cause of death
civilization suicide
Yep, once the benefit of
Yep, once the benefit of hindsight settles in the rea view mirror of life those with the benefit of foresight will be vindicated but at what cost? I breathe this sentiment every day and praise every time a minds eye is opened. Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
nice of you to stop by SS,
nice of you to stop by SS, hopefully more and more people will open their eyes, and come to the realization things have to change before we no longer have the opportunity to change, or we'll all settle in our own dust. Thanks Smoothie, always a pleasure.
You took the emotions right
You took the emotions right out of my heart and crafted them into pulsing, grinding brilliance, not unlike blues music, but with soul-clutching poetic expertise.
So many ravishing lines here, particularly the ones Cascade pointed out as well as: "believable ignorance".
So true and relevant! You nailed it with charisma and prowess.
You may call it rambling; I call it bold and fiery art.
Hello Patricia, thanks for
Hello Patricia, thanks for the nice critique, glad you found this little bit of temper to your liking. I'll go back to reading happy ending stories, and leave reality to a younger generation, it's easier to smile that way. Thanks again, it's always a pleasure.