My deepest appreciation for: My deepest appreciation for your supportive words. Your deep (and always accurate) contemplations on my work and your grasp of my vision has been a priceless gift on my journey. It is a pleasure and a privilege to peer into your own transcending voyages that fuse the best of our earthly theater with the sacred. Keep reaching higher, star whisperer and friend.
Thank you for fully: Thank you for fully understanding the poem's purpose (as you always do when you comment), and for validating it as well. The cosmic aspect of your own poetry (I mention "Council Of Stars" and "Gates Of Orion") provides a supreme example from which I have received such beneficial lessons---especially regarding the language shared among the stars.
I went through something: I went through something similar in the worst year of my life, which ran more than a year (October, 1980 through March, 1982), and I thought I would never escape it. You describe it very well.
This stunning contemplation: This stunning contemplation took the words right out of Infinite Mind and made it accessible to a broken, bewildered and hurting world.
The supreme message, cunningly transcribed for mortals, is a vindication for Poets such as yourself who have a deep understanding and reverence for the purpose, the power, of language. But with that power comes great responsibility and humanity, at this time, has defiled the sacred gift having "reduced it to frivolity or hatred".
That's a wrenching disappointment, especially in light of your expansive revelation of a Poet's Divine calling.
In the Poem's focal point, an avalanche of colossal, cosmic truth, it gets real and it feels like humanity is barred from a higher Eden:
". . . that is why Love, Who is God, at this time bars
us from a knowledge of the language shared among the stars"
Truly epic, instructive and ageless, gifted scribe of deeper reality. My respect!
the short sentence sizes show: the short sentence sizes show a bluntness a steady rythm like an anger but with clarity its very beautiful and clear while remaining pointed and emotion filled
Ouch!: This hits right in the feels. I had been trying EMDR to assist with my cPTSD however self care has always been problematic for me. Possibly due to being AuDHD. After a few attempts finally had some happy places to think on, only to have the harsh light of day show me the true reality.
Your delicately gleaming,: Your delicately gleaming, euphorically beautiful style can be described by your own words:
"In the dance of ink and paper . . ."
There are poems that move us and there are poems that immerse us. This lilting, hypnotic love song does both, and with lines that could stand alone as timeless gems:
"Through the veil of the/ past, the future peers, In the silence of the moment, the/ universe hears."
What epic insight followed by the most jubilant celebration of unshakable love. This is how true devotion shines when crystallized in excellence.
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