"And, after a while
Find: "And, after a while
Find out
That's all it took,
All along,
To end this hunger"
Yes! So elegantly expressed, undeniable and enlightened. If only your brilliant guidance would sweep across the planet. Well done.
If the comet doesn't come soon,: it's gonna be too late for us to start over again and avoid losing the last remaining pieces of what it means to be human.
Of course, I don't think the comet is coming. The "last days" aren't what the writers of religious lore thought they would be.
Special: Very heartfelt, captivating, and capturing. Pulled in and trapped with you in your rising and falling four walls of longing - north, south, east and west.
Tribalism becomes unglued by Intregrity: And that is why those person were unwilling to acknowledge yours, or admit their lackings. All the best to you. I hope time has brought you some peace, at the least, in knowing you stood up for what was right.
I am not a robot: I'm not a robot but I told AI what to write about and this is what it wrote. I bleed when I cut myself so I'm pretty certain I am real. But who knows.
Thanks for bringing that to: Thanks for bringing that to my attention PJJ. This is a familiar avenue of poetry that may be delved into with more intentionality down the road.
I can't tell you how much I: I can't tell you how much I connected to this casually sublime, organic, stirring and delicately mystical journey home. How expertly you spun the emotion, not quite an emotion, but "A feeling, a memory of a feeling/ A shadow's shadow" that is so hard to articulate.
Raw and irresistibly beautiful.
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