awkward footfalls

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awkward footfalls

 

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humanfruit's picture

Gang of giants?

The title is perfectly vague when the poem comes into view as does certain scenery can abruptly alter, especially dehydrated with storm approaching.


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redbrick's picture

The title serves as part of

The title serves as part of the poem without being intrinsically part of it, in this poem; much in the term of mental flow, hence that 'gang of giants' is a valid and quite an exciting gleaning!


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patriciajj's picture

This compact wonder is like a

This compact wonder is like a painting. I'm visualizing a cinematic juxtaposition of a gathering storm at great heights and parched earth at plunging depths as both contrast and a glorious collision, and there are undercurrents of profound meaning as in visual art. Awesome!

 
redbrick's picture

Thanks Patriciajj. A visual

Thanks Patriciajj. A visual is quite effective as a communication bridge. So glad it worked here. And the undercurrent is a power beneath what is percepticble and that is enjoyable as well. Allow me to express my gratitude for your demonstrating these in your most welcome response.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver