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SSmoothie commented on: Water to ink by justanotherscreename 1 year 24 weeks ago
Just gorgeous! Where are you: Just gorgeous! Where are you these days? 
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SSmoothie commented on: It Sucks by Free-Spirited_Wolf 1 year 24 weeks ago
Great rant you can feel the: Great rant you can feel the powerful emotions at play and the despair. Pain often brings profound insights. I am so sad that you are feeling anything like this. Happiness is fleeting but better fleeting than not at all. If happiness lasted it woukd become mundane and none would want it. Its tough but I'm sure you are tougher. So glad to hear from you. Tight  Hugss and prayerss always xx
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SSmoothie commented on: You'll forget by SSmoothie 1 year 24 weeks ago
Any time! :D: Any time! :D
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patriciajj commented on: Nocturnes: Are We There Yet? by J-C4113D 1 year 24 weeks ago
Cue the surreal and menacing: Cue the surreal and menacing music . . .   Truly awesome, the clutching power you unleashed in this brilliantly terrifying lament written from the POV of the denizens of "There". The poem moves with a cleverly plodding, dirge-like cadence through increasing levels of "unrelenting, unchanging despair" until finally "There" becomes "Here".   The progression of horror is consuming because the gravity of the speakers' collective voice and the viewpoint put the reader right into the center of the ring. It's an immersive wordscape, an audacious poetic feat, a success.   Congratulations on this!
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Starward commented on: In House Of Criminals by satishverma 1 year 24 weeks ago
Excellent, and that last line: Excellent, and that last line is very dramatic!!!
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Starward commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Thanks Be To God by J-C4113D 1 year 24 weeks ago
No idea what all or any of: No idea what all or any of that means.
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burkej1h commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Thanks Be To God by J-C4113D 1 year 24 weeks ago
33: 33, 33, 33 in me... i fascist believe when my thoughtward decieve   if I fail reminesse and call to action retort i find Lorem and ipsum and dolar in sort   i read rhyme of release and the palence of theif never rare in the air of the fast before feet fastingnof feet I should say something sweet but the lines of amphetamine call to the sheet
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burkej1h commented on: My pen is leaking by Teytonon 1 year 24 weeks ago
Graceful: Response neuter palis was pen retort.   enter paradises we called allot and made a remark talbot   ton was the vice and knew my mine would expect after dark when the late of the rise.     call ties I am sorted, and new did I bother to hue? A bunker belief if the shape wasn't new.   I had all the queens horses and all out of sort...   call the matter policia and tell her the Schwartz. finkle and fine with the waist I'm a dime, I call you at work but the line is submarine shorts.  You have all the remerol remeron viagra it was SHAVE 
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burkej1h commented on: Vicious Cycle by Tortured_Poet 1 year 24 weeks ago
I kept silent: Yet still it was expectation that regarded my thought Time flooded in and gazing at stars was something to do.   let us now therefore , no condemnation to those in Christ Jesus called according to his purpose.   for there is no forward thinking in the response of a madman is there?     we would keep to ourselves and had a long list of reasons.not y so we tried to tell ourself what it was that God really wanted from our lives.     search the response and make a query not an inquiry.  There is a significant difference.
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Tortured_Poet commented on: The meadow by chillin 1 year 24 weeks ago
I thought this was a creative: I thought this was a creative and fun piece! I enjoyed reading it and I love the style and scheme used. This is overall well written in my opinion. Thanks for sharing!
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georgeschaefer commented on: CLICHÉS OF WANNABE POETS AND PAINTERS by georgeschaefer 1 year 24 weeks ago
thank you: thank you
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patriciajj commented on: Beside the Still Fallen Sky by patriciajj 1 year 24 weeks ago
Thank you very much, fine: Thank you very much, fine wordsmith, for your validating and captivating reflections. I just read your latest poem and I'm still entranced.  So honored by your support.   
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patriciajj commented on: Willow Spirits in the Moonlight by Spinoza 1 year 24 weeks ago
You did it. You made the: You did it. You made the sublime happen, and now I have to go back and read it again so I can fully appreciate just how you made it happen.   I had so many transporting and intoxicating experiences from line to outstanding line that I was, in brief poetic ecstasy, right there under "the moon and Mercury", and between the "untamed spirits" and an enchantress worthy of making a mortal ask: "Am I a willow tree, or a howling cat/ I can not tell . . . "   Then, in a state of transcendental awe and with a wondrous, delicate touch,  you breathed poetry fit for the ages:   "and I am the owl that wakes from a dream to hoot at the rippled reflection of the moon   waiting for another late night conquest"   Bowing to your wizardry. Encore!  
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Starward commented on: You Were Very Tall by satishverma 1 year 24 weeks ago
Not entirely sure what this: Not entirely sure what this means, but I do like the format and the evocative tone of the language.
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Spinoza commented on: Beside the Still Fallen Sky by patriciajj 1 year 24 weeks ago
a common love: We share in our love of lakes and willows – and what lay above and below. Something magical therein dwells – to the woken eye. Be it night or day.
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