Excellent metaphor, presented: Excellent metaphor, presented in the most succinct and powerful format. This, to me, hearkens back to the greatest of the Greek epigrammatists.
You should try it more than: You should try it more than once. It works! The way you slipped the rhyme and rhythm into this little ember of playful seduction was sly and elegant. It a delight to read you after all this time. Rest assured that my absence is due to pressing obligations and not for lack of interest in this crucial series.
Keep penning artistry and the magnificence of love.
A share and not a right nor: A share and not a right nor an entitlement based on our innate worth for belabouring Paul's summation are as filthy rags and rubbish and dung! Quite inspiring and beneficial for the soul