Oh, yes! When we are.... as: Oh, yes! When we are.... as against when we are not - a fluidity dynamic that makes us dynamic and mysterious, the same but always different in sameness!
Just wow....
Especially: Just wow....
Especially loved :
"half of me battling
the gravity of living,
the other half
diffused in an
opal sky"
So many brilliant observations and layers
Just so humbled evry time I read one of your many profound poems so beautifully and masterfully rendered... always in awe. Stay blessed hugss ss
This poem, like your others: This poem, like your others that I have read, is excellent. I am amazed, but really not surprised by the tremendous and highly significant talent and skill that you demonstrate in your poems.
beautiful 'nude model' who is: beautiful 'nude model' who is raw, personified emotion of our true nature, justice now for troubles deep, and a poem from you is best birthday present, staggering
This beautiful sonnet is: This beautiful sonnet is excellent, and the rhymes you deploy are excellent. I especially like the way, in the first stanza, that "lies" changes both its grammatical structure and meaning. That is exquisitely subtle and also very highly skilled.
Wow! Double: Wow! Double WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is one of the finest---and I do mean the FINEST---poems I have ever read on this site! The skill with which you deploy the parish metaphor is breathtakingly EXCELLENT. I am overwhelmed by your accomplishment. This one of the most important poems on this whole site.
Thank you very much for: Thank you very much for visiting the poem and for commenting. I realize you are pressed for time right now, and I am very grateful that you made a time in your busy day to stop by.