If you’ll allow me..: If you'll allow me..
How much is that hooker in the window?
The one that says 'Marked down, on sale'
How much is that hooker in the window?
I do hope that hooker's female
I notice these hookers in the window
I've been out on a wild bender
My judgement is pretty impaired now
Don't want to f**k a transgender
too bad they don't make: too bad they don't make awesome music like they used to. Long live the Dead! Love their song-Touch of Grey. brings back fond memories
Ty.
I thought I should: Ty.
I thought I should clarify I meant it just is as in it just exists. also thanks for reading. I'm rewlly.enjoying yours as well!
take it or leave it: Well, after having read a few of your Poems, the recent ones, I can confidently fit myself in the category of sensing your obvious talent. And thank you very much for the comment.
Thank you again: That's very kind of you to say. I'm never sure what resonates with people so I just kind of try to draw comparison to conceptualizations
I have more on the way!: I had over 100 drafts that were in the "vault" as it were so I'm sure most of them will see the light of day at some point or another
Your verbal skill---highly: Your verbal skill---highly artistic and refined---is so consistent from line to line, and from poem to poem: and, in my opinion, this is a powerful indicator of talent at the highest degree of quality. You sure do have it, my friend!
Wow! I don't think I have: Wow! I don't think I have sufficient words to describe the effect of this evocation upon the reader's experience. And your powerful phrases---in the fifth and sixth lines, and in the ninth and right on into the final line---summon a sense of something I cannot articulate, but it is very definitely present. I hope to see many more of these from you; we can never have quite enough.