a fisherman casting into a body of water
as barren as a martian river bed
and, by your dispair, as equally unmoved
a guitarist whose strings turn to ghosts upon the strum
a spider sentenced to an unfortunately placed web,
you can't escape the feeling
of being alone
so you impale yourself on the shed exoskeletons of demons
who parasitized your only captive audience -
your hope and better angels and flew off
no one even on your shoulders with whom to talk
is life merely the dice roll of darwinism?
if so, what's the point?
reproduction or sterility,
feast or famine,
eat or be eaten,
king them or king me!
so now you're a little bitter,
you say you've been red-pilled,
well who put you on those drugs?
who has you hallucinating ghosts?
some kind of pyschedelic flower,
trying to get high on itself
tell me, who has you hallucinating ghosts
even where flesh-and-blood butterflies land?
seeing a transaction
even in a sincere lovers hand?
you say, "but look, i've got an empty net"
but, of course,
that body of water you're fishing
is a puddle, my friend
you say "an age of drought has kicked in,
so why not fan the flames?"
everywhere you go
boiling more promising waters away,
though it surely can't be easier
sealing your fate
so now you're older, are you wiser?
you've got yourself promising followers
you're gonna get them red-pilled,
about to deal out all of those drugs
we're gonna find, in a dumpster,
their aborted hope
some sort of carrion flower,
drawing flies to itself
tell me, who has you carving out killing fields
even when fluttering butterfly stands
are fully in season,
cutting off the reach of a lovers hand?
some tragic, ruthless, medievil king
afraid she's stealing bread
Wow, I couldn't pass this up
Wow, I couldn't pass this up and I'm glad I never do. What is there to say other than you're flippin' BRILLIANT man?! and you know it's true
bananas are the perfect food
for prostitutes
As ever, thank you
As ever, thank you kindly.
I'm grateful that the poem lived up to your generous expectations. I started out with these three lines coming to me:
"so you impale yourself on the shed exoskeletons of demons
who parasitized your only captive audience -
your hope and better angels and flew off"
I really felt something possibly worthwhile lay in those lines, and the rest of the poem sprouted out in every direction from there.
Thank you, again. My apologies for not getting back to you sooner, my friend. All the best to you.