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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Stand Alone by katie47404 4 years 31 weeks ago
Forceful (pushback), raw: Forceful (pushback), raw account of being gaslit by a spouse, as a wife and mother. Poetically, fine word play with line pairs such as "I'm so overbearing / bear our child". "Stand alone" is the theme that sows it together quite tightly, but standing alone is not a place to be left in any partnership, particularly not one founded on principles of love. Wishing you better.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Julius Caesar by saiom 4 years 31 weeks ago
Good people often make: Good people often make history, but rarely are they the writers of history. That "honor" goes to to the victors, and victory is generally attained by blood.
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allets commented on: Another Success Story by lyrycsyntyme 4 years 31 weeks ago
This sounds like wall block: . Margin Call, 2008 crash - gvt bail out. 2 big 2 Fail - another one, so that we could have this. Tightrope walking - taxing rich may not work either. Next: The R Word worse than cursing. So what is cure - time, a few more businesses fold. Meanwhile, usa is broke and what - it all falls down. . Lost value where no one wins, no one goes unscathed, the big bath and usa becomes a 3rd world country? World supply chain melts. EU collapses with the dollar worth ten cents. If giving up is hard to do, starting over is going to be a bastard! The Depression will look like a picnic. Let us again raise our glasses to Elon Musk. ~A~.
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Starward commented on: Palm Trees Defronded For Palm Sunday by saiom 4 years 31 weeks ago
The Christmas Tree is a pagan: The Christmas Tree is a pagan symbol that Christians have spiritualized.  However, I think the Four Gospels indicate that the use of palm fronds in the Palm Sunday was permitted by Jesus.  To my recollection, only the priests and pharisees objected.  I would suggest the use of palm fronds in worship might even predate Christianity by being present in the 2nd Temple Judaism which was thriving before and during Christ's ministry.  Had this been a violation of God's precepts, I doubt that He would have kept silent, or that His Church would have encouraged the palms' use in Palm Sunday liturgies.
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georgeschaefer commented on: STATUE OF ROCKY by georgeschaefer 4 years 31 weeks ago
a Philly original: a Philly original
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tumbleweed commented on: Palm Trees Defronded For Palm Sunday by saiom 4 years 31 weeks ago
Tree Tales: I lived under a palm tree for several months. Once it stabbed me right in the eye, when I was arising from bedsheets on the morn. "Spikey plants shall no longer be!" shouted my buddy in blasphemy.
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allets commented on: THE TIME TO HEAD FOR by georgeschaefer 4 years 31 weeks ago
a bishu allets moment: Poet's Isle is our destiny! Good one. ~A~
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Starward commented on: Digital Chains by patriciajj 4 years 31 weeks ago
Like Wallace Stevens,: Like Wallace Stevens, Patriciajj locates her poems' centers of gravity in various places, from poem to poem.  (Note to future grad students:  one of you might be able to write your disseration on a graph showing us the location of these centers.)  In this poem, it is the final twelve lines.  In this poem, we learn as well---for all of Patricia's poems having something about which to teach us---that patient fields might forgoet our names; that roses need us . . . while we are still breathing like humans.  For that is our role in the Universe, which can only, unassisted, dream of itself:  we are to interpret the Universe to itself, to validate its existence with our contemplation of that existence.  In ancient times, Poets named the stars, then constellated them into the characters and symbols of our stories.  Patricia, like those ancient Poets, does some of that in her poens; she also reminds us why it is important that patient fields do not forget our names, why it is good that roses still need us; and, while we take our human breath, we will also "hear /  a drizzle of music in the sun / or feel some unfiltered spiritlight kissing the air like /snow all around."     I must apologize for my delay in commenting.  I am hospitalized, having nearly bled to death internally fifteen days ago.  But when Patricia posts a poem it is, in my opinion, an EVENT on postpoems, and one which will not allow me to voluntarily postpone my response.  Patricia's poems speak cosmically; they take such a long, high view that the posting of each one is well worth setting aside any restrictions that obstruct in order to read or to comment---because she creates her poems at the highest and most ancient level of Poetry, the cosmic.
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patriciajj commented on: Breaking Out (Response to Allets' Winter to Spring Challenge) by patriciajj 4 years 31 weeks ago
Enjoying the Spring that: Enjoying the Spring that "sprang in purple" myself. Thank you for reminding me of this expression. I remember how it felt like that winter would never end, but you got us thinking about defiant blossoms and satin breezes. Enjoy the day! 
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allets commented on: Breaking Out (Response to Allets' Winter to Spring Challenge) by patriciajj 4 years 31 weeks ago
Crocus Season: They're here! They're here! Thanks for the write.04/09/22 @ 1233p. Spring sprang in purple! . ~A~.   
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DSR.Summar commented on: A Certain Kind of Madness by shewhodwellsint... 4 years 31 weeks ago
Your generosity uplifts me!: Grateful for your eloquent commentary patriciajj:) Many Blessings _()_
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allets commented on: Super Hero by allets 4 years 31 weeks ago
Respected Bishu Gentleman: I know there is no actual Santa - but sometimes I hear the phrase "Christmas came early". Believing, I do not have to explain why I'm on the floor with the kids with crayons coloring pictures of reindeer and the cat in red. That goes for Halloween too. There are witches. There Are! :D - muah! ~A~
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allets commented on: Where Did Love Go? by allets 4 years 31 weeks ago
Kinda Partial: to that last part too. Wishing you well in all you do. ~A~  
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allets commented on: Freeze The Planet by allets 4 years 31 weeks ago
Greed May Save Us: Let me see now, 40% (20 new tax 20 unpaid tax) of a trillion paid annually to Treasury Dept. Breaking up monopolies, prison time for buying Senators - yeah mere billionnaires and far fewer of them. I'm a dreamer. And being a dream, I dream big! ;D .  
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allets commented on: While The Angels Sleep by LittleLennonGurl 4 years 31 weeks ago
Less Existential: More a hard reality; too many millions of refugees. Circlr tightening around Russians everywhere. Like hong kong brain drain, countries deprived of core intelligensia have little support infrastructure. Once ukrainians taste free society offerings, they may become permanent expatriots. Hong Kong is next for China to absorb. Then Taiwan.. 2-5 million fleeing Ukraine against 44 million population is a drop in the proverbial bucket. Note: numbers of Zelensky's reported casualties are very low or not given often. . Mass killing of old and young will make Russian economic revovery extremely long and painful. Putin can only lose ultimately, and that is extremely dangerous for the world.   see bbc.com and al jazeera.com   . ~A~. 
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