From start to finish, this: From start to finish, this left me breathless.
"if hers was a madness then he wanted in" Such an exquisite line that hooked and reeled me in. All I wanted was to know this sureal and enlightened being better, and I became the observer at " the edge of Mirror Lake " pondering a living miracle.
Then the true magic happened. With a silky, narrative voice you presented the wildlife she seemed to be an extension of and hit us (beautifully) with the timeless, esoteric truth of Oneness.
So happy to have discovered your work. I'll be reading more!
"dead is dead" That's a poem: "dead is dead" That's a poem within a poem, and it says more than the most poignant elegy could ever say. No sermon or details were needed to empower your explosive, intelligent insights. This seized my heart with both hands and left me with no words but "I get it! Dead. Is. Dead. And each untimely death is one too many."
Excellent.
A magnificent tribute worthy: A magnificent tribute worthy of a groundbreaking life. The metaphorical splendor of the resilient "petaled fleece" is truly inspiring. A radiant memorial.
Appreciation from you is: Appreciation from you is something to celebrate! Thank you for looking at this with such a luminous eye and eloquent interpretations. YOU write the bravo-worthy verses.
If I recall, it takes great: If I recall, it takes great courage to interrupt a Catholic mass in any way. Good for her! The parishioners went home having heard the correct liturgy.
I'm impressed that your: I'm impressed that your friends looked past the trappings of dogma and honored what the ascended spirits represented. Your choice of the word "ultraviolet" is highly significant and represents the finest realm of spiritual evolution. May this Light bring us healing and peace.
Digital Addiction: fav lines:while/the roses still need you" apt argument for a vacation from soc-med. on walk today I SAW CROCUSES AND THEY NEEDED ME! THEN CAME HOME to catch up on Seth Meyers's Closer Look.
"...perhaps you'll hear/a drizzle of music in the sun"
Bravo line, grabed me and shook! A tentative delicately delivered line-an admonition re missed alternatives softly spoken. Big wow factor.