We're all human and we all: We're all human and we all have lives to live. I never take it personal if a person misses a question or fails to make an acknowledgment. I often do that myself so I can't judge anyone else. All we can do is try our best to live well and be kind to others. There is no need to apologize for being human. We're grateful for the small amount of interaction we have.
Another excellent treatment: Another excellent treatment of ancient myth! Although the subject matter and setting are eerie, the poem is still beautiful.
I like how you encapsulize: I like how you encapsulize the whole myth in this brief, but powerful, poem. And while some of the ancient poets wou;d have us believe that Achilles waited for Polyxena after he entered Elysium, I somehow suspect he might have entered that storied realm with an eye out for Patroclus, who had arrived there ahead of him.
Thank you. I have two pre-op: Thank you. I have two pre-op tests to pass, tomorrow and Tuesday; then Wednesday check in is 10am, procedure begins at noon.
Like King David's timeless: Like King David's timeless words, your poetic devotion radiates with a feeling of victory, joy and sincerest praise. A precious heartsong I can imagine being sung by a Heavenly choir.
I'll be praying as well and: I'll be praying as well and trusting that everything will go smoothly. Looking forward to your safe return to your PostPoems family.
A heart-stopping depiction of: A heart-stopping depiction of despair so complete that one is "incapable of even screaming". Your images of being devoured burn deep into the brain as you successfully transfer that inner death.
I never assume that all poems are autobiographical, so I'll simply say this a crushing and mournful and amazing work of art.
Thank you, great poet, for: Thank you, great poet, for such piercing and wise insights into the heart of my message. I value every one of your comments. Peace and Light.