Words have great power: Incredible, you have a way of putting the reader right there with you. The twist you imply on 'the last laugh' is bitter sweet, a triumph of the illumination of the shadows of the lie and the sadness at the truth laid bare.
So very poignant, and: So very poignant, and effectively eloquent. In the hands of a lesser artist, or a poseur, it would fail. But your highly capable skill makes it work, and work very efficiently.
I can answer that question no: I can answer that question no Heaven if you kill mice, well not in my eyes anyway. Really enjoyed reading all the detail you put into the story you really brought it to life ( no pun intended) for me.
All heart and all concern, so: All heart and all concern, so much compassion to give. A most striking part is when favourite songs are the ones that trigger the falling apart. Awesome stuff. Thanks for sharing.
It's not always that rosy on: It's not always that rosy on the other side of the fence. And there are also a lot of great things about being single. In the end we all have to find happiness within ourselves.
Thank you very much for your: Thank you very much for your compliments and for the insight as well. The reason I worded it that way at least in my head was because this person appeared into my life out of nowhere without any previous connections to me and then they slowly and skillfully, almost as if with direct intention invaded my personal space. It seemed to me as if this person came into my life at a time when I was very vulnerable and immature. So to me this person being quite a bit older than I and more versed in social and romantic cues it very much felt like he was forceful and creeping at the very same time. I will think on what you have said though and read my poem a few more times. I did not realize that it would come across strange.
Thank you again! I wish you well.