The mermaids feast

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The grandeur of the past long faded,

So is my gratitude for every situation,

Dissipated, sucked down the riptide-

I drown incapable of even screaming!

 

The decayed gray mermaids feast

Upon me with the sharks when I die,

Then I am born into yet another lie.

 

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A heart-stopping depiction of

A heart-stopping depiction of despair so complete that one is "incapable of even screaming". Your images of being devoured burn deep into the brain as you successfully transfer that inner death. 

 

I never assume that all poems are autobiographical, so I'll simply say this a crushing and mournful and amazing work of art.