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sweetwater commented on: At Last! by sweetwater 4 years 13 weeks ago
Thank you, I wished for this: Thank you, I wished for this on a 'Blood Moon' many years ago, the wish was granted. Can't wait. :-)
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SSmoothie commented on: Postcards from Eons Past (Images from the James Webb Space Telescope) by patriciajj 4 years 13 weeks ago
Wow! I really felt my spirit: Wow! I really felt my spirit move in for what is fir me two poems that could both stand in their own right!    From this gorgeous immaculate prologue:  Quantum particles or these  macro realms  like scattered jewels— each one a cluster of worlds, each one terrifying in its splendor, each one an epoch or epochs— it's all the same through the eyes of Spirit   Who showed us a day in the  life of forever,  and what a gift  to a teeming, questioning planet to rewind millennia and peer into the impossible:   Ravenous, mauling void, screaming white  pinholes: the abyss and paradise trading places  again and again, here in a  glassy freedom  running rampant,  going about its  usual business  quite nicely  without us   in the  slow-breathing  star kingdoms and pastures of  silence.    Imagine: immaculate, immortal, opulent . . . Followed by this incredible soliloquy: silence   where there  should be legends that make us weep, grind us into dust, crush our writhing hearts in a vise . . .   Magnetic darkness  like a wordless sage too evolved for our  prim and  acceptable faith, our shark-toothed love, our trifling  mortal stories,    say something.     Tell us about the rest of it.   Read from the Book of Omnipotence    here, at time's end and time's beginning, where new, polished  thoughts are  possible,   here, in the center of raging emptiness and raucous stillness between galaxies.  Galaxies!    Is this God or another exhibition at the  palace?    Whatever this is, for a moment we are perfectly cleansed and perfectly here  and perfectly united in wonder.  Both take me to very well travelled and new places thoughts and dillemas. You have so beautifully penned these here. I hope you don't mind that I like them individually more than together, the perfection of the first has left an indelible impression on my thoughts. Best blessings Ss.  
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georgeschaefer commented on: TRANSPLANTED BEATNIK by georgeschaefer 4 years 13 weeks ago
thank you for the kind words: thank you for the kind words
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Wordman commented on: At Last! by sweetwater 4 years 13 weeks ago
  The Crossroads of dreams:   The Crossroads of dreams are always worth the meet. Congratulations on yours.  
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Wordman commented on: Musing In A Shady Wood. by sweetwater 4 years 13 weeks ago
  The simplicity of what:   The simplicity of what surrounds our lives every day is a pleasure to read, when painted with words by a true artist.  Thank you for this, it's beautiful.  
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Starward commented on: Lost by rachel 4 years 13 weeks ago
This has a very eerie tone,: This has a very eerie tone, but makes a very dramatic point.
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ramonathompsont commented on: LANGUAGE OF ROMANCE by joy 4 years 13 weeks ago
love this. has a great flow: love this. has a great flow and message to it. Kind of a stop and smell the roses vibe.
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Starward commented on: September Approaching by rachel 4 years 13 weeks ago
This is very good.: This is very good.
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life_used_to_be... commented on: half truths/half awake by tallsquirrelgirl 4 years 13 weeks ago
Love this. Hope you are well!: Love this. Hope you are well!
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life_used_to_be... commented on: Domestic Violets by Incompl 4 years 13 weeks ago
Fucking savage. Excellent: Fucking savage. Excellent write. 
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Starward commented on: Nocturnes: Now That One Of Them Is Dead by Starward-Led 4 years 13 weeks ago
Thank you so very much: Thank you so very much indeed!
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Incompl commented on: Nocturnes: Now That One Of Them Is Dead by Starward-Led 4 years 13 weeks ago
"Can yours ever be the same: "Can yours ever be the same where you are?" I have never been able to put this haunting sentiment into words. how you made grief sound so beautiful! 
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Starward commented on: mercy call by catherine 4 years 13 weeks ago
I feel like that about every: I feel like that about every other day, and twice on Saturdays!
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Starward commented on: Speakeasy by Incompl 4 years 13 weeks ago
I likw how the thirteenth: I likw how the thirteenth line seems to stabilize the poem's process only for the last line to disrupt it so dramatically.
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Incompl commented on: Eternal Morsel by allets 4 years 13 weeks ago
She stays faithful to us and: She stays faithful to us and still scorned. thinking of you fondly Lady A and as always, comforted by your words. 
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