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Pungus commented on: not all that glisters is gold by redbrick 3 years 46 weeks* ago* Throne for nature to regrow: An earthquake rumbles- Tumble, crumble, rubble [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: the serpent by Spinoza 3 years 46 weeks* ago* I wanted to read this: I wanted to read this captivating, sly and jolting statement a few times because your strategy is very effective. The message is underscored by your brilliant choice of structure and voice; the sparse lines speak with an ominous, serpentine perception and coil around our consciousness in the blink of an eye. A shrewd and farsighted wake-up call. Love it! [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: not all that glisters is gold by redbrick 3 years 46 weeks* ago* A vivid and refined analogy: A vivid and refined analogy that illustrates the desirability of what is simple and natural over human definitions of opulence. Another brilliant perspective. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: One Bullet Ended It All by randyjohnson 3 years 46 weeks* ago* While the poem definitely: While the poem definitely presents a cautiomary tale, it should be posted, perhaps, well after the holiday and not this close to the holiday's arrival. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Clinging To A Shrine I Could Only Imagine by Starward-Led 3 years 46 weeks* ago* The inspiration you draw from: The inspiration you draw from Nguyen De is like a transporting breeze, and this is no exception; the vibrant winds resulted in excellence in purity, emotional impact and execution. It's lines like these that glisten and hum long after the last line is read: ". . . So, in my junior high school naivete, I concluded that if I could imagine bruises, scrapes, and damage schoolbooks into reality, I should also be able to imagine my own, private, and sheltering shrine to the Glory of Christ." Quiet magnificence. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: cait's weed by Pungus 3 years 46 weeks* ago* Your expression whispers and: Your expression whispers and haunts and shatters. A few delicate, relatable lines that pinpoint the experience take on so much power in your talented hands that I'm silenced. And that's art. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: A message for a friend by SSmoothie 3 years 46 weeks* ago* "sometimes its as simple as : "sometimes its as simple as remembering to reach out with a prayer and breathe in the answer" The casual splendor, the unflinching truth, the shimmering wit, the realness of your expression has almost moved me to tears. Every line says: "I know!" Every word says: "hope" A perfect pocket dial with a profound message that makes us all your friend. [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: JOIN TOGETHER by georgeschaefer 3 years 46 weeks* ago* Mmm: Fair enough, good sir, in faith we surf the waves of turfs unblurffed by words [ go to comment ]
georgeschaefer commented on: JOIN TOGETHER by georgeschaefer 3 years 46 weeks* ago* redemption of a: redemption of a recollection. Just a memory of some youthful bliss. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Clinging To A Shrine I Could Only Imagine by Starward-Led 3 years 46 weeks* ago* Thanks.: Thanks. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: He should be dead by LornaRJ 3 years 47 weeks* ago* I like the way you have used: I like the way you have used a skeptic's point of view for this poem. [ go to comment ]
uninvited_1 commented on: Unknown by uninvited_1 3 years 47 weeks* ago* Thanks pungus. Glad you can: Thanks pungus. Glad you can connect with it. [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: Unknown by uninvited_1 3 years 47 weeks* ago* Speaks to me personally: Speaks to me personally, which is good considering I really like the content. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: No stone unturned, leave by Teytonon 3 years 47 weeks* ago* Musk is proof of man's great disease: People will ignore your grave sins - as long as you dress your words in their tribal outfits - until you sin against them. And, just the same, those who despised you before will suddenly sing your praise if you turn your fangs against their enemies. [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: Clinging To A Shrine I Could Only Imagine by Starward-Led 3 years 47 weeks* ago* Subliminal glyphs AGLOW here: Subliminal glyphs AGLOW here, specialized, like scoring a rare card in a Pokemon pack; something happens in the snap of your fingers, as you clack down courage upon the keyboard, and navigate us through a powerful pastlife with a flattering, matter-of-fact, lovely language. [ go to comment ]