This is a unique poem,: This is a unique poem, describing your dad and his love for cars in a short but sweet style. Nice to see something different. Keep writing
This is another excellent: This is another excellent summary of the Nativity events. I would question, however, your statement that "It wasn;t well organized." That directly contradicts the last line of the preceding stanza, and also implies a criticism of God's exact plan for accomplishing all this.
I am sorry for the glitch that opened a second comment.: I am sorry for the glitch that opened a second comment. Please delete. I did not mean to clutter up this poem's comment section.