Love Song

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Love

Can I move with you
Through the universe
Without believing
There are stars all ‘round?

Or follow the sun
With your dazzling eyes
On this summer night

Yes, I can
I know I can
With you

With you

With this love
It’s just easy
With you

With you

Can I sing to you
‘cross deep moonlit seas
Whispering, breathing
An enchanting sound

My voice on the wind
Fills love with my sighs
On this summer night

Yes I can
I know I can
With you

With you

Yes, I can
It’s just so right
With you

With you

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I love poems that contain

I love poems that contain astronomical images, and this one deploys them right at the outset.  Although an integral part of this very fine poem, the first four lines constitute a poem of their own, an aphoristic poem.  It is an honor and a delight to be able to comment on this poem, written by one of Postpoems' first Poets and, therefore, a pioneer of online Poetry.


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