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Oh, people in the pizzeria,

Pests among the pepperoni

Particles. Oh what a night,

It feels far from right here

When everything around

Is festering with strife dear!

 

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redbrick's picture

That captures that current

That captures that current state of being where it is quite deflating to find a pleasurable out on the town moment.


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patriciajj's picture

I'm there and I'm feeling it.

I'm there and I'm feeling it. You did an expert job creating a frantic, claustrophobic and hostile atmosphere that reflects the inner discord of the diners. A highly significant poem that has the impact of postmodernist art. Brilliant title as well. 

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Yeah, now I'm just tryna

Yeah, now I'm just tryna catch a break from the scene, before being shoved right back in those bloodsuckers! :)


peace, pot, tequila shot

Jesus loves us, stoned or not