The Conflict of Loving You

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Haiku's on Love

Darkened shadows come
And despite still loving you
The light slowly dies.

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S74RW4RD's picture

I applaud this beautiful

I applaud this beautiful Haiku and your respect for the customary lineation and syllabification.


Starward

jordanchambers's picture

Thank you kindly.

Thank you kindly.


"Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light."
~Steven Kloves (screenplay), Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban, 2004, spoken by the character Albus Dumbledore

allets's picture

Haiku

In five seven five
There is no light possible
dawn is mythical.

I like the form - Lady A


 

 

Beavis's picture

Nice haiku!

Good write!

ashes_theartofburning's picture

I.know.it's.hard.to.shine.

Rekindle you must!
Never let it fade away!
Absence of light; dim.

Beautiful Haiku.
^_^
Keep up the great work!


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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Beautiful as your own is!

Beautiful as your own is!


"Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light."
~Steven Kloves (screenplay), Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban, 2004, spoken by the character Albus Dumbledore