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Jimi_Mayhem commented on: From The Core of My Heart by twyllamedina 43 weeks 16 hours ago
Beautiful : Beautiful
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redbrick commented on: where the reed faun grows by redbrick 43 weeks 19 hours ago
Thanks again. The poem "the: Thanks again. The poem "the day they carried " was meant to follow. Perhaps it would pass as a sequel. 
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redbrick commented on: point of bliss by redbrick 43 weeks 19 hours ago
That's nice to hear. Thanks: That's nice to hear. Thanks for making you so much. It truly means a lot 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: where the reed faun grows by redbrick 43 weeks 1 day ago
Beautiful!  And I mean . . . : Beautiful!  And I mean . . .  BEAUTIFUL!  And it calls for a sequel.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: point of bliss by redbrick 43 weeks 1 day ago
-I think this is very much a: -I think this is very much a philosophical poem, right up there with the best of Wallace Stevens.
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redbrick commented on: descent by redbrick 43 weeks 4 days ago
Both angles valid and: Both angles valid and required. So it's all for us to be glad of them being thusly so 
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redbrick commented on: they come asking, again by redbrick 43 weeks 4 days ago
That is why the next poem was: That is why the next poem was an attempt to clarify the pronoun-shenanigans
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Pungus commented on: they come asking, again by redbrick 43 weeks 4 days ago
The shift from pronouns makes: The shift from pronouns makes for an interesting riddle: who's who? I like how the 'you' seems to address both the narrator and audience simultaneously.
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Pungus commented on: descent by redbrick 43 weeks 4 days ago
Yes, I see precisely what you: Yes, I see precisely what you mean, the message we sense in the final stanza there especially draws that contrast; whereas mine may be patriarchal, yours is much more positive.
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redbrick commented on: blotting pad by Pungus 43 weeks 5 days ago
Quite a complement to the: Quite a complement to the poem: "descent"; it's the other side of that coin and its opposite sound. 
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ramonathompsont commented on: Miserable by metaphorist 44 weeks 2 hours ago
Hope you feel better soon.: Hope you feel better soon. Remember tough times never last forever.
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Teytonon commented on: When I Gaze Upon Your Beauty by Jimi_Mayhem 44 weeks 5 hours ago
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alanarileycheng commented on: SWEET INFLICTION by alanarileycheng 44 weeks 1 day ago
Thank You: Hi there, and thank you so very much for taking the time to read my poem and I deeply appreciate it and I hope that you're having a lovely day! :)
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Teytonon commented on: SWEET INFLICTION by alanarileycheng 44 weeks 1 day ago
Shakespeare said it..: Shakespeare said it: 'To thine own self be true' Looks like you certainly are. Good for you! Thanks for posting.
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