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S74rw4rd commented on: War Porn by lyrycsyntyme 2 years 26 weeks ago
During my childhood in the: During my childhood in the sixties, we were subjected to all kinds of war porn in support of the conflict in Viet Nam.  In second grade, many of us boys asked for, and received from our parents, small "green berets" during the time that particular ballad was on the radio.  In my school, our third grade gym teacher was a former Marine and he wasted at least a quarter of each gyn class hour teaching us to respond to his shouts like TenHut and ParadeRest, and so forth.  Even in Cub Scouts, and, later, my two years in Scouting, there was an intensely militaristic "vibe" in everything we were taught and required to do; that vive, and, also, a tacit demand for conformity.  Even when I went up to college, my parents were dismayed that I attend class in bell-bottom jeans and, on balmy days, flipflops instead of shoes and socks.  
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Wordman commented on: As Is by Wordman 2 years 26 weeks ago
Hello Patricia, thanks for: Hello Patricia, thanks for the nice critique, glad you found this little bit of temper to your liking. I'll go back to reading happy ending stories, and leave reality to a younger generation, it's easier to smile that way. Thanks again, it's always a pleasure. 
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S74rw4rd commented on: Zoey The Ghostwatcher, And Mrs. Brown, The Ghost by S74rw4rd-13d 2 years 26 weeks ago
Thank you very much for: Thank you very much for commenting on this small tale about the smallest member of my family, yet one who is so big-hearted.  Yes, she was traumatized and never ventured up there again.  When we first rescued Zoey, she could not climb up the three front porch steps at the residence in which we were then living.  By the time we brought my mother to live with us, in the larger house, she could almost leap up the steps to the bookroom, and, on the afternoon of the sighting, she came down those steps with equal speed.      Zoey also had a way of diagnosing us when we are facing an illness.  She would approach whichever one of us was sick, and just sit and stare into our eyes, as if she was obsessing over something.  Within twenty-four hours or less, whichever one of us was stared at became ill.  She has a fairly accurate record with that, until recently.  Now she is lame and tired all the time, and sleeps most of the day and night.       When I was thirteen, my parents bought me a very pedigreed cocker spaniel pup, jet black, whom I named Monica, and with whom I bonded immediately.  She could read all of my moods.  Twelve years later, she developed a stomach cancer, and the vet wanted to put her down.  I asked him how long she might have to live, and he said a matter of three or four months.  I asked him if she was in pain, and he said no, and even demonstrated by pressing her abdomen and she did not respond.  He said it would eventually become too painful for her to stretch out on the flloor.  I told him if he thought she had three or four months, we would give it to her and bring her in only upon the very first indication of pain.  That was in the summer of 1983; Monica lived until late May of 1986.  She had stretched out that May morning and began to whimper, so, while I was at work, my father took her to the vet.  I never thought I would ever meet another dog as empathetic as Monica was, until I met Zoey.  
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patriciajj commented on: As Is by Wordman 2 years 26 weeks ago
You took the emotions right: You took the emotions right out of my heart and crafted them into pulsing, grinding brilliance, not unlike blues music, but with soul-clutching poetic expertise.   So many ravishing lines here, particularly the ones Cascade pointed out as well as: "believable ignorance".   So true and relevant! You nailed it with charisma and prowess.   You may call it rambling;  I call it bold and fiery art. 
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patriciajj commented on: Zoey The Ghostwatcher, And Mrs. Brown, The Ghost by S74rw4rd-13d 2 years 26 weeks ago
Knowing you, your collection: Knowing you, your collection of books was amazing, so perhaps Mrs. Brown just wanted to take a peek.   What a fascinating story. Sometimes real life experience is more compelling than fiction, especially when narrated with skill.   Just sorry little Zoey was traumatized.      
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patriciajj commented on: hold your applause by Pungus 2 years 26 weeks ago
This explosion of creativity: This explosion of creativity rocked me, challenged me, stunned me. Edgy, frenetic and tragic . . . and the way you spilled your thoughts: absolutely brilliant. Simply must applaud!  
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patriciajj commented on: The Ravaging Illness by lyrycsyntyme 2 years 26 weeks ago
An urgent call for a more: An urgent call for a more egalitarian, a more civilized, worldview. I was struck by your inventive, poignant and visionary approach to the subject. Nothing stale or preachy here! Perhaps it all begins in the heart of a true Poet.    Well said!     
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patriciajj commented on: THANKFUL FOR APACHE BLESSING by joy 2 years 26 weeks ago
With a delicate, honest and: With a delicate, honest and stirring whisper of indigenous eloquence, you wove something precious. I truly was blessed!  
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SaraMariaRaphael444 commented on: Tears of a Decaf Drinker by SaraMariaRaphael444 2 years 26 weeks ago
Thank you!: Thank you for your kind words, much appreciated. ☺️
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ramonathompsont commented on: Tears of a Decaf Drinker by SaraMariaRaphael444 2 years 26 weeks ago
perfection. so much emotion: perfection. so much emotion captured in just a few words. bravo!
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Teytonon commented on: GREATEST LEGS by georgeschaefer 2 years 27 weeks ago
Czech girls walking… : Czech girls walking No brassiere  Czechs are bouncing In no rush  For them to clear
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Teytonon commented on: HOW MUCH IS THAT HOOKER IN THE WINDOW by georgeschaefer 2 years 27 weeks ago
When it comes to a transgender…: When it comes to a transgender  I'm no Eddie Murphy acolyte  When over I bend a transgender I'm sorry but something's not right    If I notice something is wagging I realize it's not a tail If I don't want to start gagging I'll say goodbye and run like hail
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georgeschaefer commented on: HOW MUCH IS THAT HOOKER IN THE WINDOW by georgeschaefer 2 years 27 weeks ago
songs from our youth do tend: songs from our youth do tend to inspire vivid memories.  thank you for commenting and reading
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georgeschaefer commented on: HOW MUCH IS THAT HOOKER IN THE WINDOW by georgeschaefer 2 years 27 weeks ago
so you're not an Eddie Murphy: so you're not an Eddie Murphy acolyte?
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georgeschaefer commented on: HOW MUCH IS THAT HOOKER IN THE WINDOW by georgeschaefer 2 years 27 weeks ago
prostitutes do have that: prostitutes do have that effect
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