my dreams are not a bradford pear
bursting forth suddenly and hastily grown,
their rings are tightly knit and slow to spread.
my dreams are not fragile, susceptible to splintering
when the fierce winds of adversity blow
with heavier boughs than their trunk can support.
my dreams do not bear inedible fruit,
and pretty flowers that smell of acrid flesh
planted solely for their aesthetic pleasantry.
my dreams are the mighty sequoia,
the sycamore and cedar, begrudgingly slow,
lost in the forest, saplings among giants.
my dreams send their roots deep into the aquafir
binding themselves into the depths of the earth
as scarcely a leaf has unfolded to taste the sun.
my dreams are not ornamental, to be grown for kindling,
pallet wood, pulped into paper or pencils sharpened to a nub;
they are a late crop, patient, planted for generations to come.
my dreams will be mighty boards,
decking vast man o' wars at sea;
my dreams are pillars of rosewood
holding up the homes of the wise;
my dreams shall grow and their shade shall linger
long after I have been planted in the soil as a seed...
Your extended metaphor is
Your extended metaphor is classic, astute, and impressive.
Starward
Thank you! The realization
Thank you! The realization that God will use me and my work however He sees fit has been a wonderful comfort to me lately. I will never get to see the fullness of His purpose, but He is faithful to not waste a single moment of our lives when we are submitted to his will.
"Paper is patient." - Anne Frank
I applaud your theology!
I applaud your theology!
Starward