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patriciajj's picture

Amazing! The sumptuous

Amazing! The sumptuous pleasure of it; the serpentine flow of brilliantly assembled lines; the build up to that heart-melting finale. Just . . . Wow! Signature crypticbard. It's always a pleasure. 

 
redbrick's picture

Thanks patriciajj. Glad there

Thanks patriciajj. Glad there is enjoyment to be had here.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver

S74RW4RD's picture

Wow.  This poem sets several

Wow.  This poem sets several different processes into motion and then orchestrates them into that final line which is so very poignant, and so very authentic.  This is an excellent poem.


Starward

redbrick's picture

Thank you most kindly. I'm

Thank you most kindly. I'm glad that you got into the varying processes set within the lines.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver