This story is great: This story is great
You can read it quickly, but after reading it, you may stop to meditate a lot, and then come back to read it again.
This story is great
" It's so hard to feel good ": Yes, you don't need to live with fear.
You are amazing and initiative..
You have a butterfly soul.
And a feeling thinner than the breeze
I'm deeply moved by your: I'm deeply moved by your gracious and appreciative words. You've done much to keep this site alive. Keep shining, gifted Poet.
Thank you for that comment,: Thank you for that comment, and you should not be embarrassed at all, as you did mention the two most important aspects of the poem---the Star of Bethlehem, and the Magi.
I really appreciate your validation of this particular poem, and the second paragraph of your comment is particularly encouraging for me to continue with more. I am so grateful for all of yours words---Poems and comments---and how much you help this site to thrive.
I'm embarrassed to say that I: I'm embarrassed to say that I wasn't able to solve the puzzle, not being a Bible scholar and not having your vast knowledge of history, although it seems that the speaker is witnessing the awe-inspirng event of the star of Bethlehem rising. So perhaps one of the Magi?
But the real reason I'm commenting is because I was stricken by the pristine beauty, the feeling of ascension and wonder, the infusion of moving drama . . . the sheer magnificence of this triumph. Even though I can't identify the speaker for certain, there's so many glorious moving parts here and each one deserves high praise.
Applause!
I enjoyed that moment when: I enjoyed that moment when the sad, heavy tone switched suddenly and you knew your strength:
"yesYES yes yes yes!!!"
You have an ability to unwrap all the nuances of the human story in startling new ways. That takes skill. Always a pleasure to visit here.
I hope you are well and: I hope you are well and through your rough patch. Hugs and prayers for you and all our Postpomies love hugss and best wishes also ket us know how you did go. ♡Ss